Really really really loved reading it! You know I could feel the characters mature as the chapters progressed and I especially liked the fact that they were not fixated on one single issue:-D Also you wrote the story very beautifully. Thank you so much for sharing it:-)

Bravo, chica. BRAVO.

I think its unfair that bella blames Emmett and Edwards dad more than she blames Edward. Edward is more at fault

I'm re-reading this story and the last part with the marriage thing just gets me swooning with no fail. Gah.

Finally broke down and read this story...I was so worried it would be too angsty for me, UT I really enjoyed it! Drama for sure but just the right amount. I snagged your books from Amazon too - excited to keep reading.

I love this. I can't believe I spent the last two days reading because I couldn't stop. :D It's so good and your writing is simply breathtaking, as always. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for creating this work of art. You always leave me feeling as though I'm IN the story right along-side your characters. Maybe that's why I love your stories so much. This one is beautiful and I think it's official ... your Edward stole my heart, too. :)

I wasn't gonna review until the end, but after this chapter... :( I haven't read this story before. I don't know what I was doing when you wrote it, but I remember being busy and thinking I'd read it when it was finished, and then I never did. So I'm doing it now. It's so true to all of your other stories and your writing style. I love it. :) Your Bella is really wonderful and even though I knew Edward had something shady about him, I totally fell in love with him, just like Bella did. And reading this chapter... Not a lot of fanfic guts me anymore. This did. :( You wrote it perfectly and my heart breaks for him, even though it shouldn't. I can't wait to see where these two go from here. :)
Your talent astounds me, like always. :)

Great story with lots of fun twists and turns! I'm a little sad it's over but I like where you've left them. Thanks for sharing!

Simply beautiful adventure story. Thanks for sharing.

Love it!

This was one action-packed nugget of goodness...Thanks!

Aww. He cried.

I've just finished reading this for the second time. This story makes me want to go to the islands. Just the other day someone suggested El Conquistador in Puerto Rico, for a vacation spot. You have an advantage of growing up in the Caribbean.

Hands down you are one of my favorite authors.

So you're not doing any more fan fiction, so sad to see that. I am interested in you other work. I would like to support and keep up with things/books you are doing. Just as long as you are writing I will be happy.

Loved it...every last bit! The action was super tense and always had me on edge. The love story had my heart flying and aching. Awesome job?

I loved this story! I couldn't put it down