Reviews for The Advisor
kim-onka chapter 1 . 5/1/2014
What an amazing twist ending, and in first-person narration at that! Exquisitely done. All these double meanings - eyes that make his heart beat faster, a kiss on the chest... You even put another advisor in to mislead the reader! I was a bit suspicious due to no name being given, and the second part does feel a bit off, more and more so, leading up to the reveal. And the narration is still coherent and believable throughout the story (he is not called the Deceiver for nothing, after all). Really great.
insertappropropriatenamehere chapter 1 . 12/3/2013
Huh. I could have sworn that was Narvi's point of view in the first section.
Fortune Zyne chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
This was an excellent story! Well done!'