|Reviews for Ageless Maelstrom|
| narmulti chapter 13 . 12/2/2014
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| NABBYCIS chapter 13 . 11/6/2014
cool storie keep it up
| Madgormley chapter 13 . 10/16/2014
Excellent story keep the updates coming
| Holy Sasami chapter 11 . 10/7/2014
Actually the Flames of Amaterasu would be MORE weak against his power because they are unnatural and ONLY burn for seven days and seven nights. So they realy should have gone out as soon as they entered range of his power because seven days is almost an instant for his power. I mean the Flames of Amaterasu work on time not fuel.
| HaywireEagle chapter 2 . 9/30/2014
Unreadable wall of text.
You need to seperate your characters dialogue from one another. Then there is the fact that everything feels rough and forced.
It doesn't seem to flow naturally as it should.
| The Eternal FrostbiteLeo chapter 13 . 9/18/2014
please update this story and silver lions pride as soon as possible.
| WEDoNtCaReWHO chapter 13 . 9/6/2014
Dang i was looking forward to the next chapter when I hit chapter 13.
| weilder of the purified shadow chapter 13 . 9/7/2014
I actually kinda expected a 'naruto in the bleach universe' fic based off of the description involving the hogyoku and kyoka suigetsu but this is actually much better than a few of the naruto bleach x-overs ive read, il give it 7 out of 10 since i kinda got annoyed with being left on the edge of my seat at ch 6. Anyway update soon
| vitalie28 chapter 13 . 8/26/2014
| Important chapter 3 . 8/17/2014
Just to let you know, there is a fic out there that is nearly word for work copy of this.
| vmage2 chapter 4 . 8/16/2014
I think it should be Naruto-nii at the end. I think nee is used for females.
| Maedre chapter 3 . 8/14/2014
Oh God, just cant read further. The plot not agreeing with me would be an understatement of the century.
Writing style is pretty good in comparision.
| GravityTonttu chapter 12 . 8/2/2014
WAY too many non-japanese names (and crossovers to boot). Since the Narutoverse doesen't have any other languages than japanese, it feels weird.
| 619 chapter 13 . 7/28/2014
Really enjoy your story it's awesome
Can naruto revive Rin plz and let Rin and konan also be paired with naruto
| Guest chapter 13 . 7/28/2014
Very good story and the way you set it up is perfect. Keep up the good work!