Reviews for Ageless Maelstrom
ijonk chapter 11 . 3/28/2016
hmm.. nice story.. altough naruto is too sappy to my taste, n too easely manipulate n control by kyubi if she want to.. because he is litterally under his thumb n too soft to her while kyoka n specially choetsu being less apriciated
bjorn aleswiller chapter 13 . 2/23/2016
The wave Hollow is Kaiza just going to call that now... He died tragically and he would have wanted to stay behind to look after Inari and Tsunami so he changed into a hollow because of all the negative emotions...
himalay1729 chapter 10 . 2/21/2016
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himalay1729 chapter 4 . 2/21/2016
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himalay1729 chapter 3 . 2/21/2016
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himalay1729 chapter 1 . 2/21/2016
nice -:-:-)
Guest chapter 7 . 2/9/2016
What is with people in incest it's disgusting
Guest chapter 12 . 12/13/2015
bro-con reina
DarknessIncarnate2000 chapter 13 . 9/18/2015
Great story and I can't wait for you to update it but I think your kinda have the wrong idea about, and no I'm not talking about if she's in your harem or not, I'd actually like to see where you go with this whole Hanabi/Hinata switch. It's the same misconception a lot of people have on her, she couldn't approach Naruto because her confidence was shot to all high hell, you could even go so far as to say her life was worse than Naruto's in some aspects(some not all), I mean she was demeaned by her family, neglected by her father, possibly subjected to child abuse but they would call it 'training', and hated by her brother figure, she virtually had no one but Hanabi but she could only do so much, like Naruto only had Teuchi and Ayame to acknowledge his existence, Hinata only had Hanabi, but unlike Naruto who had already had it set in mind(Uzumkai blood) come hail or high water he was going to gain recognition, she didn't feel worthy of friendship or acknowledgment(subconsciously at least), if Naruto would have turned her down, I have no doubt in my mind she'd commit senpakku, and before you comment on that remember these are troubled Japanese children. In all honesty Naruto, Hinata, and Anko should've committed senpakku a long time ago(Gaara tried to so I actually find it hard to believe none of them tried it, two scorned by their village the other by her own family(tragic lives indeed) ). And sorry if it seems like I'm snapping on you, I'm just telling you what I've summarized from the little tid bits of info from her background and my psychologist side kind of took over.
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