Reviews for Ageless Maelstrom
Icon of Sin chapter 13 . 3/26/2015
Looking forward to more updates.
narutoyugitofuu chapter 12 . 3/14/2015
NARUKUSHI. PLEASE update the story.
Ranmaleopard chapter 13 . 3/3/2015
This is just awesome I can't wait for more!
narutoyugitofuu chapter 13 . 2/26/2015
NARUKUSHI!
Ballazan chapter 13 . 2/26/2015
WHERE IS THE NEXT CHAPTER ALREADY!?
Simon D. Uzumaki chapter 13 . 2/22/2015
i am interested to see hwo it comes along if there are indeed more updates
Guest chapter 13 . 1/16/2015
I love this fic! I understand you situation with debts especially for school. But don't give up you'll make it. Along with that don't stress out too much. Can't wait till the next chapter!
Guest chapter 13 . 12/23/2014
Please please update! Christmas is two days away! ! Give us the gift of a new chapter!
narmulti chapter 13 . 12/2/2014
UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON
Root Of Darkness chapter 13 . 11/6/2014
cool storie keep it up
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Madgormley chapter 13 . 10/16/2014
Excellent story keep the updates coming
Holy Sasami chapter 11 . 10/7/2014
Actually the Flames of Amaterasu would be MORE weak against his power because they are unnatural and ONLY burn for seven days and seven nights. So they realy should have gone out as soon as they entered range of his power because seven days is almost an instant for his power. I mean the Flames of Amaterasu work on time not fuel.
HaywireEagle chapter 2 . 9/30/2014
Unreadable wall of text.

You need to seperate your characters dialogue from one another. Then there is the fact that everything feels rough and forced.

It doesn't seem to flow naturally as it should.
The Eternal FrostbiteLeo chapter 13 . 9/18/2014
please update this story and silver lions pride as soon as possible.
WEDoNtCaReWHO chapter 13 . 9/6/2014
Dang i was looking forward to the next chapter when I hit chapter 13.
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