Reviews for Ageless Maelstrom
code R.R chapter 2 . 4/1/2013
I liked this so far and how the world is being set up
dayfox96 chapter 2 . 4/1/2013
Cool fic I await more to form a definit opinion but good work.
Sabaku Ookami chapter 2 . 4/1/2013
Guess it's mine turn to review your story now :p

... you're links there at the end were mutilated.

Either use a link shrinker the uses urls fanfiction is unfamiliar with or put spaces where the dot's are.

2 chapters and you have a crapload of favorites, followers and reviews. Though I can see why, this is an interesting start to a story.
Intelligo chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
Walls of text.
lou2003us chapter 2 . 3/30/2013
I really want to see what happens next!

Looking forward to next chapter!

Keep up the great work.
Maleivius chapter 2 . 3/30/2013
Interesting start, I look forward to seeing where you go with this story. Can't wait for the next update!
tedlay chapter 2 . 3/29/2013
Amazing story please update asap
The Man chapter 2 . 3/28/2013
Do continue. You have my interest.
KokuenDG chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
It's...really hard to read this. Could you maybe space it out more and put some space in between the lines or something? It was good, but I really hope you can adjust the layout of the story so it won't be a chore to read it.
xCastel chapter 2 . 3/28/2013
Nice to see someone making use of the Mask Temple, always an interesting concept to be honest. It looks like with the pieces you have set up it feels like Naruto is going to be influenced by both Hollow and Shinigami. And the Hyogyoku being involved, is he going to be a transcendent?

Keep it up.
ElementalMaster16 chapter 2 . 3/26/2013
Very awesome so far!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! (_)
Guest chapter 2 . 3/26/2013
muito legal, gostei.
The Fox Paradox 9 chapter 2 . 3/26/2013
Please update I love this and can't wait for Naruto to kick ass!
Questions:
Is the Sandaime evil?
Who is in the Harem? (Please have Kushina, Hinata, or Anko in it)
Anyways keep up the good work and stay awesome!
soulofdragon1 chapter 2 . 3/25/2013
the links are half gone so if you dont mind could u put it up in your profile?
gamerman5603 chapter 2 . 3/25/2013
update soon please
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