Reviews for I Loved Her First
Buggus264 chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
:') awww...
Mikado X Goddess chapter 1 . 4/11/2013
love it 3
TTcouples chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
Very sweet :)
notwritten chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
Thwas very good. Keep smiling. :-)
Lylabeth 1 chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
I don't know who you are, I have not looked yet at your profile, but, I will, oh, yes, I will. That was excellent. Story line. Character development. Syntax. Everything. I loved it. One of the best I have read. It draws you. It reminded me of this favorite old poem I heard as a child:

" Turn around and she's one, turn around and she's four, turn around and she's a young girl going out of the door, turn around, turn around, turn around, and she's a young wife with babes of her own. "

I wish you knew the tune. It is so perfect.

Best development of Robert that I have seen.
Mandamoonrose chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
This was tender, inspiring, and insightful! Love it!
FireShifter chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
I love it! ;D Beautifully done. Great short story! Keep on writing!
Andromada-Morningstar chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
Oh so amazing. so sweet and heartfelt