Reviews for Lover's on the Fifth Floor
MartyMc49 chapter 2 . 4/17
Yes indeed, this chapter is as good as the first. Maybe a little better!
MartyMc49 chapter 1 . 4/17
This is a fantastic story. By the way - I love your deleted paragraph.
Jubs chapter 3 . 2/8/2016
OMG! I just came across this fanfic and the only word I can use to describe it, is "Wow". Seriously this is the best fanfic of The Mentalist that I've ever read in my whole life XD I loved the way that you explored so deeply all thoughs and emotions that the characters might have been feeling, and also how there is no plot holes in the fanfic nor ooc characters. This fanfic is just incredibly awesome and I really hope with all my heart that you will update soon (even if it's been 3 years)! Please update! (Sorry for any gramatical mistakes, I'm brazilian :P)
LouiseKurylo chapter 3 . 4/23/2015
You do such a beautiful job with their interior life, fluent in painting the emotional aftermath of near death and near tragedy and dawning recognition and acceptance of love. Beautiful writing. Thank you.
klcarr892 chapter 3 . 10/13/2014
I hope you're planning on continuing this because it's one of my favorites on here and deserves to be completed. So well written. ;o)
LouiseKurylo chapter 1 . 6/24/2014
Intense, vivid. Action counterbalanced and enhanced with their interior lives. Excellent. Thank you for writing it.
Guest chapter 3 . 4/16/2014
I love your style of writitng very discriptive and your examples to help explain situations like the car crash one with love and life ive tried fanfiction before but im terrible and im waiting for the next chapter!:)
guest chapter 3 . 11/26/2013
Any chance of ever updating?
Guest chapter 3 . 5/20/2013
wish you would update this story or find someone to finish it for you. It is really good.
Carla chapter 3 . 4/30/2013
Uau. So long hiatus. Why?
Guest chapter 3 . 4/22/2013
I'm really sad we haven't gotten an update to this story. :(
Anna chapter 3 . 4/13/2013
Msreadalot71292 chapter 3 . 4/11/2013
Sounds like ur a fan of the crossover btw...I realy hope jane and lisbon get to gwthervsoooooon
marshmallowdeviant chapter 3 . 4/9/2013
Thanks for updating! And don't worry too much about frequency- your life is way more important than any fit and we'll happily take what we can get :D chapter was great- evocative, angsty and edging towards that complicated relationship question... Wondering if red John wouldn't make a play for Jane while he's in the hospital if he really intended to kill him? also would definitely love to read whatever you feel like posting :) x
Bruna Fights Back chapter 3 . 4/9/2013
This is awesome :D
I just have one question, since Lexi, and as it seems Mark too, is alive while Meredith is pregnant, is this like an Au in Grey's universe where the plane crash never happened? Or where the shooting never happened?
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