Wow, you made Iris a likable character, you made the team and world even more interesting, and this stoy has been a fun ride throughout. It feels like a Pokemon adventures magna, and those have always been awesome

Gahhh!1 why is this so good, why am I loving this so much?

Hallmark of a good...OC? Does LEaf count as an OC since she is techinically based off the LEaf character you could play as in Pokemon leaf green/fire red? I'm calling her an OC. Is whne you see her badly hurt and you CARE about the character enough that you are worried for their safety.

It's been a long time since you wrote this but it still one of my favorites never stop writing you're really good at it! Thank you for this amazing experience

"Giovanni is Ash'sfather,"

Wow, had't seen that cliche in ages! Ho w have you been you old seadog! OH, come here you *hugs the cliche*

Ok, serious now. While it is an cliche, it is a good one that can be done well. So lets see tha this brings to th table.

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You know, before this, the best Pokemon fic I had read was a comedy fic where Mewtwo killed a bunch of kids shows. Then, we have this wich has blown everything out of the water. This story...god, its been a fun ride and can't wait to read more!

What a stunning story.
your plot was phenomenal. Following all the details was an experience never to be doubled. Every character was used and given growth - even without noticing; case in point, Barry.
I absolutely had to finish this story.

It was wonderful...honestly, I prefer Negaishipping over Pokeshipping/Amour shipping and Wishfulshipping. Anyways, it was wonderful!

Darn, I thought we were going to see Red, he was on Mt. Silver the last anyone ever heard f his whereabouts.

Somebody. PLEASE. Make this a book, as in a legitimate paper printed book.

Or Arceus, Mew and Kyurem help me, I will sic Ninetales and Espeon and Serperior and Lapras and every other Pokemon in my team on somebody.

Finally, I read this last chapter! No matter how much I say I love this story I really can't describe. It is the bestest story ever. I wish there would be a movie based on this story.
Now I can finally read its sequel. This is so amazing!

Everyone is together, huh? It is cute!

Wow! This chapter was all about flashback. I love it.

Drew hurt Solidad :( That's not nice. Your chapters are so big, I always forget what points I have to out in XD
I bet the knock is done by Mewtwo.
I hope Ash would be fine soon.

Whoa! It looks like everyone has returned! That's cool.
Ash fell! I hope he'd be okay.