To Lu
I just finished reading your story, and it was truly good. Definitely one of the best from a FANFICTION site. Decent stories on this site awesome hard to find, but this was like reading a genuine novel. The Giovanni thing was...out there but I found it intriguing. I definitely await your sequel.

I just wanna know what is happening with leaf and lance it's like you're dangling it in front of me just out of my fingers

I feel like everyone but Tracey and Brock are going... I feel like this is sorta suspicious lol.

Rival zoned is the golden word of the night. I love it. I love how subtle all the ships are put in amidst the plot. It's enough to keep me satisfied and the pace of the story is going great too.
I love how Leaf has so much say in everything then you have poor ash. I'm looking forward to some of her flashbacks when/if they come.

CALLED IT that's all I have to say

Well snap leaf you are on fire! This has such a promising ad unpredictable plot!

This is so great, I love the fact you're combining the movie elements with anime! It's even better than the actual series. I love it! I'm songlad this is finished so I can read it nonstop. I don't even mid that tere are barely shippy moments because this whole plot has got me enthralled. It's really well written too!

I don't even how I stumbled on to this but I'm glad I did. I mean this is amazing! I'm not even into the pokemon fandom (but pokemon will forever be one of my fondest memories in my childhood) and this. I didn't know when I was hooked, but the moment I was I couldn't stop reading this. It was amazing with all the controversies and the relationships and what they did and wow. Almost all your characters grew in this fic and they weren't forced or OOC or anything and it was wonderful. I was so invested in each of your characters and sympathized with them with every step of their journey. They felt so human and I loved it. x3

Long story short, this is probably my standard for most of the pokemon fics I'll ever read (if I read any) because this was awesome. x3

This fic is turning me into a full on Gary fangirl. I need pom poms!

Oh I just love Gary

Wow most stories build up and build up ("she struggled, the words caught in her throat. Could she really tell him? Should she...?") to the point where no one cares anymore. But this one was just thrown out. He's your father BAM! Sunglasses, deal with it. I literally stammered "holy-holy fuck crap!" out loud. I frickin love this fic x)

I just have to say appreciate the metaphor in the last line for a second. Stuff like that is the mark of a great writer.

Man, that was quite a story. And you know what? It was awesome, and actually made sense for much of it. While the romance was an important part throughout, you never let the main plot be overtaken by it, and nobody went into Mary Sue territory. I'm glad with how it ended, but also curious as to how it would change with gen 6.

I love this story and I am hoping for a sequel! Of course, I understand if you don't write one. It might be hard since they effectively put Team Rocket out of business... But there are plenty of other criminal organizations in the world of pokemon for them to obliterate! )

This is my absolute favourite pokemon story!