Very emotional

Didn't expect that turn of events. I'm pleasantly surprised.
Lance is very practical
Paul is hilarious
Jelly - filled doughnuts are true evil and nothing will change my mind

Jesus christ Giovanni

Really liked the part with Trip and his family. You didn't have to do Daisy like that damn lol

Great writing for the title drop

Ash... Dense but not too dense, is he?

Damn, lots of it going down

Contestshipping
Handymanshipping
Cliffhangers
POV switches
A proper time line
I love it

Just amazing

Re-reading one of the best fanfics ever

Rereading this masterpiece. Binged it years ago so I couldn't review it properly.

I read and I loved the entire thing! You have read every character perfectly, especially May and Harley because PeanutButter and erghm... Lingeries...
I am really impressed with Drew, Gary and Leaf's sass and comments and just how perfectly you have put them together. Kudos!
The Waterflower Sisters are always difficult to build a character on, since they have not got as much as screen time on the anime. But you have done a wonderful job with them.
Honestly I would love to talk about each and every character, you have so perfectly sketched, but I am afraid, I can't spend much time on that. My apologies. I had to hear the story all the while doing my homework. I hope you forgive me for that.
Another thing that I would love to learn from your story, is your way of writing. It's beautiful. I was drawn to the way you had placed each detail, so perfectly and at appropriate places. Littlest things such as how Winona did not around at once to look at Walace, but decied to see his reflection. I mean, the first chapter of the story has a way of trapping the reader. It is not as much as later in the story, but the first few chapters, tell just how much effort you have put into your writing. I honestly would love to get some tips from you.
If I get around to writing stories, I will definitely keep this in mind. Ash is nothing without his friends.

I couldn’t stop reading before but I’m making myself do so now. This story is simply that good.
Very well written, good plot and very engaging. It has everything I could possibly need in a fanfic.
Please, never stop writing, you have a gift and know that you made me a very happy person. ;)

And yeah, the humor was really well and generously placed.

And the shippings, oh, So many of them, and all were well balanced, too!

Poke (AshxMisty), Contest(DrewxMay), Ikari(PaulxDawn), Oldrival/Leafgreen(GaryxLeaf), Wishful(CilanxIris), LoliShota/DarkSteel(StevenxCynthia), Graceful(WallacexWinona), Curtain(ReggiexMaylene), Slight Penguin(KennyxDawn) Soulsilver(SilverxLyra), maybe ColdCoffee(PaulxBarry), Handyman(TraceyxDaisy), Luck (Brock x Lucy), slight KantoContest(HarleyxSolidad), slight Snowbell(ZoeyxCandice), etc.
And the majority of these are my favourites! Triple Whammy!

I have read this multiple times, and it never ceases to amaze me. The rush to get to know what's gonna happen makes me miss a few lines of the stories, and when I reread it, it makes me swell with emotion. Like, when Ash was comatose (or was he? Maybe he was in surgery, dunno, gotta reread!) I totally missed Pikachu's reaction the first time. When I read it carefully, it made me cry for probs the first time in months, years maybe. "Heart-wrenching wails", wow. I can never say it enough, but this author deserves something good. FF should hold polls, or something, right?

I really loved the action, adventure, risks, raw emotion, nervousness related with teens, and the background study, though descriptive, gave a more than clear idea of this headcanon, and so I can easily say that this is the best anime verse headcanon. Frankly, Napaj is way better than Isshu, or whatever else is being posted nowadays.

Loved this story, You got a BIG Fan in me, Lu, really.

Glad to have read this story.