I was right! Who's next, and why?! Great chapter! I can't wait to read the next one! :)

How do you keep blowing me away?! This is just so...in only 5 chapters you've managed to get me to think that this is amazing. That is really something. You've got an amazing talent, never ever stop writing, please. You are just so Goddamn amazing. I say that word too much.

Anyways, I wanna make this review smuper long like previous ones, but I'm late for an appointment. UPDATE SOON. YOU ARE SO AMAZING.

Awesome chapter it's all starting to come together, man don't know if I'll survive until the next update is released due to all the anticipation you really are doing a remarkable job and your story line has me absolutely hooked.

How will Ash handle this new revelation, I think Ash is going to be having some deep thoughts I'd imagine he'll spend a bit of time in solitude whether alone in his room or going for walks in deep reflection, I wonder if he'll make a solo trip to the Orange isles and consult Lugia (after all his Pigeot isn't far from his current location or his Charizard could make his reappearance. I also wonder if he'll make the connection to the things that are happening to his dreams and occasionally hearing the voice (which I know is Mewtwo as your not hiding that fact and Mewtwo is clearly using his power to call out to Ash for help).

I just hope the next one isn't to far away, until then.

Dang brick iris and cilian better be moved to palet town and stay with professor oak he's got room. Ash better keep his strongest Pokemon with him at all times. Also if they're investigating him why don't they just ask him directly between him and his friends they'll find out all about everything he's been apart of including events not listed in the gmen reports like the time they saw mewtwo in johto or the events in every Pokemon movie.

Wow! Finally, I've been looking for a good and epic story to read! This may be it! I have a feeling the mysterious Pokemon is Mewtwo! Only someone as epic as him can cause unwanted chaos and mayhem lol.

Oh my god! Who's next?!

This is getting really good. I hope you update soon.

So uh… is there going to be any wishfulshipping? Because I like wishfulshipping.
Also, you'd think the more than 16 times he saved the whole entire everything would be proof enough that Ash isn't exactly normal.

Whoa. Awesome. This update made me happy.

Awesome story I can't wait for the next chapter I'm nearly shaking with anticipation. Wait until Drew finds out his theory is right about it circling around Ash as I'm guessing Paul was the one specifically targeted who will be next Dawn and her family, Brock, Cilan, Iris and I'm sure there are way more like Snap perhaps Oak/Gary/Tracy.

Also getting the vibe and not sure I should mention this in a review as if I'm right massive spoiler but is Lance Ash's father? I'm not even sure I want a confirmation if I'm right or not as it will lesson some of the intrigue.

Also hope Ash ends up hooking up with Brock again before things get into full swing like he said get the old group back together Ash, Misty and Brock.

Hope the next one is really close to being released as your update speed seems to be really fast so far. Until the next one.

Great chapter.

Very intriguing.

:)

I look forward to the next chapter.

This story is simply amazing :DDD

I love how you're able to manage so many characters at the same time without making it seem rushed or confusing. The way you connect one incident with the next keeps me on my toes. Moreover, I somehow anticipate Leaf meeting up with the others! Agent Green is sooo cool. I love how she handled the situation with Officer Jenny. Drew is also wonderful, how he spoke up to those powerful trainers. I'd be totally frightened and keep my mouth shut the whole time :P
Also Steven x Cynthia are such a cute couple. What are the called in the Shipping world?

I can't help but wonder if Ash is unknowingly causing all of this mess. When he sleeps and dreams for example. Or maybe Giovanni is his father somehow? ;) Poor Dawn I have the feeling she's next... Oh my gosh, I'm so excited for the next chapter! Someone over here is very glad that you said you'd update weekly :D

Anyway, keep up the good work! Your beta as well! Thanks for sharing :D

["I know you're probably really worried and upset over this whole situation, but try not to let it run the holidays for you. I'm sure Candice will be fine."]

"run" should be "ruin".
Aaaaand I think that's all I noticed.

Sorry for the late review! I've been really busy helping take care of my new little sister.

HOW DO YOU MAKE THESE CHAPTERS SO LONG AND AWESOME AND AMAZING AND-GAH!

...Ignore my outburst.

This chapter was AMAZING. OMG. I was totally squealing about everyone thinking May and Drew are dating! :D I'm like, the biggest ContestShipper EVER, so that's probably why. ;) Drew TOTALLY would think that It's completely ammusing. Especially when May goes all red in the face and starts babbling. ;D SO CUTE.

I really wanna make this review super long like my last one (my last review was the longest review I have ever written, EVER), but I have to go eat dinner now. Again, sorry for the late review and this chappy smuper amazing! Hope to see another update soon!

I love this story! Is Mewtwo targeting the people who know Ash or something? And why does Ash have dreams that are connected with Mewtwo? I really want to know what happens next! Great story, great chapter! Can't wait to read the next chapter! :) Great job!

That's a really interesting beginning, huh? It does indeed have lots of potential to grow into a big story. Loved the references and the characterization, keep the good work and good luck on working in the future chapters!

Cheers