The conversation between Zoey and Candice was really sad. it is something to see Zoey being so sad in the situation but having to keep a smile and not say anything even though she absolutely wants to. Getting news right after the holidays that a beloved one died is so heartbreaking, and it isn't hard to understand how all these poor kids are feeling about the situation. However, the thing I adored about this chapter is Gary speech to Ash and Misty about the G-men never finding Giovanni. Gary is so clever and smug, he revealed the true about the G-Men. They are powerful and clever and good people, but they are not as proactive as they probably should be. And Gary noting that this way, made it so obvious to me that everything isn't 100% secure and anything can happen and go bad, no matter how much they try. Misty not commenting and knowing about it, makes me wonder how many other kids realized this as well. The last sentence about Iris, Cilan and Dawn not commenting, kinda makes me think that they are also having some doubts. It is courageous that they are going with the plan anyway. The second thing I love about this chapter was the part with Cilan climbing the tree and Iris. There is something about that scene that depicts their friendship/relationship so perfectly.

Delia is such a sweet mother and nice person, seeing her depressed and in tears like that is so heartbreaking. I hope she is finding comfort and friendship in the other parents and adults there. I could see her bound with Johanna since they seem to have some similar part of their past. I just want her to have friends so she wouldn't be so lonely lmao I also adore how everyone know that Drew is head over heals for May...except for May herself. Even Paul -who doesn't give a damn about anyone ever- trying to explain it to her made me laugh. The scene between Misty and Ash was heartwarming as well. The end with the plan of the bus crash shocked me. I wasn't thinking they were going to get to a plan THAT serious.

Aww Delia considering Brock like a son of hers is just so sweet and cute! It definitely warmed my heart! I kinda see Delia as everyone's mom here. She is definitely motherly and so nice with everyone. The reveal of this chapter quite shocked me, I didn't think it was going this way, I am so interested in what is going to happen.

Honestly, I am still worried about Trip's mother to be honest. I hope she is okay. But other than that, I am actually really happy to see everyone at the same place and interacting with each other! This was always something I hoped would happen in the anime, just a big gathering and you wrote it so much like I imagine it! Even if things are quite serious, I couldn't help but to have a smile on my face every time character A that never interacted with character B would talk. It's very nice!

I have to say I adore that you included Leaf into the story. I always loved the character design of Leaf, adored the personality in the manga and always felt sad that she never appeared in the anime. But I am happy that she is part of the story and I really like the personality you gave her.

Ok, I clicked on this fic interested by the title. After the first chapter I was like ok this is really interesting, love how it's written. After the second chapter I was already in love with how you write the characters and how realistic this is. I could totally picture this happening in the anime. It is really true to the media. As I am writing this review, I am now at chapter 10 and absolutely addicted. I have so many stuff I need to do and take care of, but this is what was on my mind for the past couple of days. I am absolutely impressed and I think you might be my new favorite writer.

Genial gg

I like this story specially how the situation guide them to they'll supose to be, the bdst part to me was Misty speach before met Nando, that was epic to me.

When I have time I'll looking for the second part.

I ask for apollogies because english its my second leanguage and I'm not experiance enough in writing.

Regards

okay I just noticed the timestamp. forgive me.

now it's almost 4 am so i could be wrong, but wasn't Agatha supposed to be dead?

this was a very good story, i really love the way you wrote it and its pretty cool

You know that chapter right after the climax of the fic where Paul was getting his arm x-rayed? I fully expected Reggie to somehow notice that Paul's attitude had changed towards the members of their group. Sure I know that he really had no way of knowing that change but it still came as a surprise.

Seriously, at least two of the chapter titles seem almost as though they were inspired by Macbeth or something. Anyway, the story up till now is just freakin' amazing, the climax was handled superbly and now all it needs is a strong ending then you're golden.

Ugh, people just aren't supposed to be able to pull off half the stunts they manage. Not to mention the amount of faith they seem to have for each other is just ridiculous. I'm pretty sure no one would believe that a good many of them had never even known the other's existence until 2 months ago.
Gotta say, the name you chose for this fic is freakin' perfect. There is literally no other name that'd fit it this well.

Pretty sure I'm just as confused as the rest of them about Ash's actions. What the heck was he planning on?