Reviews for Structures in Adversity
Guest chapter 6 . 11/23/2017
Harry needs to steal the invisibility cloak, the Maurader's map, and start meeting Sev in the Room of Requirement (comically called the Come and Go Room, which reminds me of sex and of Dumbledore's chamberpots).
Guest chapter 5 . 11/23/2017
Harry and Sev could set the Mauraders on fire. Roast venison is a nice idea, but nobody wants roasted rat or dog.
Guest chapter 4 . 11/23/2017
Good chapter. Sirius and Peter were murdering thugs in the books, so I'm not surprised to see James and Remus just like them.
Thanatophobia kills chapter 1 . 9/25/2017
BITCH ITS REGULUS!? OMIGOSH THE POOR CINNAMON BUN
Fenris Jin chapter 17 . 4/13/2016
I kept defending Severus' honor, but I have to admit, he was a right ass when he revealed that Harry was a Horcrux. Bastard. XD

Anyway, that was a rather nice Snarry read. Plus a Dramione treat too! :D
Fenris Jin chapter 16 . 4/13/2016
It's funny how Harry deems it alright to trust Draco not to betray Hermione based on Veela instincts of a mate.. From where I'm standing he, himself has betrayed and even judged harshly in his mind his own mate, admittedly it was because he 'thought' Severus was bad, but the fact remains, hhis mate is second only to his other priorities during the war. XD
Fenris Jin chapter 15 . 4/13/2016
I'm fairly disappointed at Harry for his reaction to discovering the Prince's identity.

Harry is always hot and cold when it comes to Severus. Will he make up his mind? He's always complaining that Severus is distant with him, but he goes around thinking the worst of the man. He feels rejected and abandoned? Newsflash, Severus feels judged and condemned.

Now I'm starting to lean on Severus never reconciling with such a child. If he can't accept the man for who and what he has become without laying blame, then it's better for Severus to start fresh without condemnation from his mate. Maybe in death he'll finally find peace after all.
Fenris Jin chapter 14 . 4/13/2016
Aww.. Harry is still a Horcrux. I wonder what Severus will decide. Run and save his mate? XD
Fenris Jin chapter 13 . 4/13/2016
Well that's more like it. Severus kicking ass.. Although admittedly those are teenage asses. XD

At least he wasn't hit by any lucky shots. XD
Fenris Jin chapter 12 . 4/13/2016
I like how Harry is suffering from withdrawal.. He's so judgmental of how Severus reacted without even hearing the man out. XD
Fenris Jin chapter 10 . 4/13/2016
Hold on.. Did Harry ever found out who the Half-Blood Prince was? In canon, it was when Severus killed Albus, they skipped that part here though.
Fenris Jin chapter 9 . 4/13/2016
I feel like Harry abandoned Severus and betrayed him. I know it's not the case, it's just that Severus has suffered for so long and the moment Harry came back, it was all misguided accusations. XD
Fenris Jin chapter 8 . 4/13/2016
Cissy with wings! Yay! XD

Hmm, I wonder what role Draco will play between the Snarry relationship.
Fenris Jin chapter 7 . 4/13/2016
Whoa. Poor thing.

Severus definitely got the worse of the bargain. He lost his mate for twenty years! That's an awfully long time. Might as well be another life time.
Fenris Jin chapter 5 . 4/12/2016
I laughed out loud at Harry's reaction to his wings.. XD

Hmm, if he's a fire type, I wonder what Severus is. XD
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