|Reviews for One Sided|
| shoelys chapter 1 . 12/29/2013
oh my GOD what would even make you WRITE THIS I AM TRYING SO HARD NOT TO CRY BUT I STILL HAVE SKINNY LOVE PLAYING IN THE BACKGROUND AND IT IS NOT
oh my god i'm just there's no words for how this made me feel congrats you have successfully written rotg angst here's your reward it's a sobbing lys have fun with it but be careful it's fragile and already half-broken due to mishandling
i'm just going to go turn off this god damn song before i really start sobbing
| GhostDog401 chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
...well that hurt my heart
| carinims01 chapter 1 . 9/9/2013
I think you've just killed me. I am sitting here, at my laptop, at 11:30pm, *sobbing* Not regular I-can't-stop-crying-sobs. No, I mean the full blown I-can't-breath-I'm getting-light-headed gaspy, hiccupy sobs. I mean, that was absolutely beautiful in so many ways an I can't even... I'm not even coherent right now, and I'm supposed to message my friend about my reaction to this fic because she just read it and she was crying 20 minutes after she finished. God, I'm glad I didn't read this at school-I would have cried aloud and just... THIS. Oh my gosh.
Jack's absolute adoration of this girl. In the movie, this is exactly how it was. He dotted over her, I know it. Just by what he told her about playing hopscotch EVERYDAY, I know that he just adored his little sister. AND THEN THIS HAPPENED?! It was so, so, so, so beautiful. She totally saw him in the end there, didn't she? She TOTALLY saw him and she was totally carrying on a conversation with him and he didn't even realize it because he's wanted it so long and she didn't realize it because she's old and expecting to die. I... I mean, I've killed off characters in my fics, but this... THIS. To have THIS happen to a seventeen year old boy and his little sister? Heartbreaking. Heartbreaking, and beautiful.
Very, very well done. Do you have any plans for more Rise of the Guardian fics? 'Cause I'd definitely be interested. :D
| ErinNovelist chapter 1 . 9/9/2013
Can't. Stop. Crying. God damn it.
This was beautiful. I loved it. God, I'm sobbing. Oh God. This sucks; I hate crying. This was just brilliant. I loved it. Excuse me.
| MissBlueSunglasses chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
Aww this was so sad. Why? It's beautiful but so so sad.
| RainbowDoggy123 chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
That was so sad and AWSOME!
| A Dream Or Not chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
I'M CRYING OMG nooooooooo *sobs loudly in the corner*
| RainbowDragon127 chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
I admit. I cried as I continue reading. This is story is touching and beautiful. So emotional. I have sympathy for both of them. Faving this and will not regret it.
| RememberThatCoolPerson chapter 1 . 8/6/2013
I have never cried to a published book or a fanfiction, but this one did the impossible. I cried. Great story anyway!
| Ryah Ignis chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
What did I just read? That was the most utterly heart-wrenching thing I have ever read in my life. Just...Jack. There was so much angst potential in that story and you just brought it out full force. What a tragic, tragic end.
Oh, just...oh I can't talk... Great work
| royriza4ever chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
That was so sad... But so good!
| TaylorRose16 chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
Wow, this was very touching. Very well written, my dear, I enjoyed it a lot. You captured the emotions very well. Thank you for sharing this. *huggles Jack*
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/3/2013
i've been crying over this fic for months now (﹏)
| dbzfan8 chapter 1 . 5/31/2013
Oh my gosh, I've always loved the angst in that movie.
But this is just so- gah! So sad ;(
| Ally Marton chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
I'm bawling... that's not fair.. that's- that's not- WHY WOULD YOU WRITE THIS? WHY WOULD YOU LET YOUR HEART FEEL THIS SADNESS, AND THEN SHARE IT?!
That was the most bitter sweet angstiest IRONY filled story I have read in a long... long time. Excuse me while I favorite.
And now I need to go cry MORE...