Reviews for Twists in Time
Sunrise moon 2 chapter 4 . 8/30
Why don't they just stay at Mako's? She lives alone.
Moonlight-Sakuras chapter 4 . 8/20
Please update!
HyenaYu chapter 4 . 8/10
I know you are busy, but, can u write more?
Guest chapter 4 . 8/7
l like see new chapter
LoveInTheBattleField chapter 4 . 7/11
Nice, keep it coming

What Makes A Dad

God took the strength of a mountain,
The majesty of a tree,
The warmth of a summer run,
The calm of a quiet sea,
The generous soul of nature,
The comforting arm of night,
The wisdom of the ages,
The power of the eagle's flight,
The joy of a morning in spring,
The faith of a mustard seed,
The patience of eternity,
The depth of a family need,
Then God combined these qualities,
When there was nothing more to add,
He knew His masterpiece was complete,
And so, He called it...Dad.

Happy Belated Father's Day!


Father's are the strength of the family,
To bond us and hold us together.

Always there to mediate the household,
A determined mentor we look to lead altogether.

He's the bodyguard that protects us,
And give us comfort from all harm.

He constantly offers compassion,
Always offering up his arm.

To stand behind us endlessly,
Though at times in darkness we tend to fall.

He always their to guide us to the light,
For us to follow from his call.

With years to come, day by day,
We grow from the nest we grew.

In hope to become something great,
For I hope to someday be like you.

A Father's love is never ending,
Always there with a heart of pure gold.

I love you Dad forever,
I know you'll always be my stronghold.

Happy Belated Father's Day!
Nath08 chapter 4 . 7/11
I love your story, please keep going!
Sailor Neo Angel chapter 4 . 7/10
Just thought of something... did they leave Chibiusa alone in the future?
Guest chapter 4 . 7/10
I like how Serenity put Mars in her place. Good chapter.
Guest chapter 4 . 7/10
l like it
l like see new chapter
Guest chapter 4 . 7/10
Please update soon! This story is awesome! What a great idea! I love cliff hangers but don't leave me hanging for too long!
lilyoftheval5 chapter 4 . 7/10
Wonderful chapter, progressed far more in plot/explanation than I hoped.

Looking foward to Endymions losing masks.
Was surprised at the extreme reaction to Mars's actions.
El0ndon chapter 4 . 7/10
This story is really good so far! Keep it up and update soon!
slightlyxjaded chapter 4 . 7/10
Not sure why I waited until this chapter to read this story, but I am here now and love it! I really love the is a very interesting idea. This has led to some interesting interactions already so I can't wait to see what else happens! If Serenity revealed the identity of the future king, I wonder if she will reveal who she is as well! Eeeeekkk Mars is really letting her temper show! Thank you for writing what seems like a great story so far! Keep up the great work!
Elendrhys chapter 4 . 7/10
Hehe ! Ca valait le coup d'attendre tout ce temps Ce chapitre est très intéressant et Serenity a une personnalité qui me plait bien, elle ne se laisse pas marcher sur les pieds! Bien joué Jenny, tu me tiens en haleine une fois de plus! Vivement la suite!
maryyorke chapter 4 . 7/9
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