|Reviews for Thorin the king of oblivious|
| purple5901 chapter 1 . 1/17/2014
Your punctuation is completley wrong. You have commas in places where there should be full stops and then just generally everywhere! PLEASE FIX IT!
| Motaku1235 chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
Fascinating. Though I do think this could've dragged on a bit longer.
| vampygurl402 chapter 1 . 3/16/2013