|Reviews for Locked In|
| Katzy4869 chapter 4 . 3/21/2013
Name of Prank: Invisible Door
Prank Description: Put invisiblr duct tape on the doorway of a very dimly lit room and wait for someone to enter the room.
The one will be wrapped up in duct tape.
Name of Game: Paper Chase
How to Play: okay. There are 2 Teams and 1 who has to write/hide the papers. The papers will be hidden somewhere. The 1 who has to hide them must write difficult riddles on the papers but the riddle must have a hint to where the next paper is! There can be as many papers as you want :D The 2 Teams get to start with 1 paper and have to go on until they get to the treasure. I might have explained it a bit weird.. ' sorry..
| DragonPrank chapter 3 . 3/17/2013
Hey, this story is HILARIOUS! Ouch Ryuga... That's gotta hurt. Ha-Ha, Reiji got colored on... That a really funny picture... Update again soon! Ryuga forever! Caio, DragonPrank
| The Lonely Potato chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
Me: IKR? Racing is always more fun whe someone gets hurt!
Gin (OC): especially when that someone is Ryuga XD
Ryuga: *Glares* (- big mistake) what was that?!
Me and Gin: *gives signature death glares* you heard us!
Ryuga: *jumps back* okay! Yeesh.
| Wave Ripper chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
This was hilarious XD Madoka is evil for grabbing Ryuga's hair! :P
| LisLiBrit chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
You're plot is nice but I suggest giving more details to your OC's :D
Also, can you leave some space inside the paragraphs? It is hard and confusing to read such a long paragraph. That's all!
Overall, your plot is nice and you still kept the characters in shape. Just give a few more details involving your OC's and don't forget about the inside paragraph spacing ;)