Reviews for Po Goes Evil
newguy100 chapter 1 . 8/4/2013
That was a great one shot I am glad. Great job and thanks for reading my story.
Master Cheese Cake chapter 1 . 7/4/2013
-The main gripe I had with your story is the structure of it. It's just one huge paragraph and makes it hard for me to read.
-The dialogue is mixed in with the subject and actions, also it takes me a while to comprehend it's dialogue.
-Another thing you should watch out for is verb tense. (Past, present, future)
-Some punctuation errors
-Make sure you proofread multiple times before posting try to catch as much errors as possible.
Miguel el romantico je chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
ABSOLUTELY GREAT! AJAJAJAJAJA ME CHARM TEA IMAGINE HAD BEEN SO CHAU IMPRECIONANTE COMPLETELY IMPRECIONANTE HEHE SEGUI ASI AND I HOPE MORE CHANGES IN THE FILM AND SERIES OF PO. BY THAT ENVERDAD I TASTE
SEE YOU SOON AND GOOD LUCK
:DDDDD
Eddy chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
Really u didnt put anything just po goes evil thats not cool I mean really not cool