Reviews for Beyblade Metal Fury: Sandra's Secret
Beast Princess chapter 34 . 4/5
Can you please update! I'm dying to know what happens! This cliffhanger is pushing me off it's edge! That last part was suppose to be a joke but I meant it literally too. So please update!
Dequincy chapter 34 . 9/30/2014
Here is the third OC.

Gon.

Age: 11.

Gon is the younger brother of Massemune.

Appearance: Gone is a slim young boy who is relatively tall for his age with short greenish black spikey hair and brown eyes. He wears green shorts, green boots, and a green long sleeve shirt with a mandarin collar.

Personality: Gon is carefree and cheerful. He is creative and is capable of seeing things his own way. He is a lot like Massemune in so many ways. Carefree, Optimistic, Stubborn, Impulsive, Sincere and Expressive, Creative, Proud and Competitive.

Beyblade: Ponyta. This bey is suntan, orange and yellow, and looks like the pokemon, Ponyta, when in it's beast form. This bey is also a fire type.

Attacks: Ember, Flame Charge, Fire Spin, Inferno, Fire Blast, Fire Blitz, Sunny Day, Over Heat, Incinerate, Will-O-Wisp and Heat Wave.

Special Move: Flame Wheel.

Gon, Killua and Kurapica are all friends and are traviling together. They will be in the next chapter.
Dequincy chapter 34 . 9/30/2014
Since it looks like you're using OCs again could you use these last three?

Kurapika.

Age: 17.

Kurapika the newest member of Team Wang Hu Zhong.

Appearance: Kurapika has medium blond hair and grey eyes. He uses black contact lenses to hide the fact that his eyes turn scarlet when he is angered. He wears a blue cape-like outer garment with a mandarin collar, an orange hem, a white full body training suit underneath, and a pair of blue Chinese style flats.

Personality: Kurapika is level-headed, intelligent, and knowledgeable. He can appear cold and distant at times.

Beyblade: Hitmonlee. This bey is brown and looks just like the pokemon, Hitmonlee when in it's beast form. This is also a fighting type bey.

Attacks: Close Combat, Double Kick, Revenge, Reversal, Rolling Kick, Jump Kick, Brick Break, Bulk Up, Low Sweep, Focus Blast, Rock Smash, Power Up Punch, Counter, High Jump Kick, Vacuum Wave, Dynamic Punch, Focus Punch, Low Kick, Seismic Toss, and Mach Punch.

Special Move: Superpower.

Killua.

Age: 12.

Killua is the younger brother of Ryuga.

Appearance: Killua is slender and fairly tall for a boy his age with messy short silver hair and blue eyes. He wears sports shoes, shorts, a long sleeve violet undershirt, and a pale purple short sleeve T-Shirt.

Personality: Killua is a whimsical Liar. His personality is similar to that of a cat-unpredictable. He is quite cold-hearted, but generally he is a somewhat shy boy. He has a quick analytical mind capable of making sensible decisions. However, sometimes he acts on impulse to defend his reputation and pride.

The salient features of Killua's personality: Ruthless: When Killua is in a bey battle, he eliminates his opponents without mercy. Carefree: Killua's words and actions are typical of a happy go lucky young boy. Carefree and Rational: Killua is careful and can make wise decisions and act matter of factly in dire situations. Observent and Creative: Killua has an eye for detale and is capable of coming up with clever ways to defeat his opponents.

Beyblade: Reshiram. This bey is white and looks like the pokemon, Reshiram, when in it's beast form. This bey is a Dragon/Fire type.

Attacks: Fire Fang, Flamethrower, Fire Blast, Blue Flare, Sunny Day, Flame Charge, Overheat, Incinerate, Will-O-Wisp, and Heat Wave.

Special Move: Fusion Flare.
Dequincy chapter 34 . 9/30/2014
Great chapter! Riku and Lady Shadow will be in the next chapter. Riku reveals that he is a P.I. for the WBBA and that he joined Nemesis not to revive the god of destruction, but to stop it from being revived. Riku reveals to Amber that the phone calls he was getting were from Gigi's parents. He also reveals that he didn't tell Amber about him working undercover to stop Nemesis because he didn't want her getting caught in the crossfire. Lady Shadow also reveals that she works for the WBBA just like Riku.
Galaxy-Star-Pegasus chapter 34 . 9/29/2014
Ooh, interesting chapter. XD
Beast Princess chapter 34 . 9/29/2014
Thanks for using Jasmine here. Update soon!
CygnusCrown Night chapter 33 . 9/29/2014
*Jumps for joy*
YOU VE UPDATED!:)
Good job:D
Dequincy chapter 33 . 9/28/2014
Stacy also changed her last name from Fiasco to De Vil because Fiasco reminded Stacy that she was related to Gigi. Stacy also has the abilities to use the dark power of Nemesis just like Pluto and Rago. She had Pluto retrieve Dynamis for her. She also knows that Dynamis knew that she was behind Nemesis's revival. Dynamis decided to keep quiet about it rather then warn Kyoya, Sandra, Gigi and all of their friends.
Dequincy chapter 33 . 9/28/2014
Other crimes: Stacy told Doji where L-Drago was, she poisoned Toby and made him sick, she sent Massamune away so she could turn Zeo against him, she arranged the meeting between Zeo and Dr. Zigerat. She told Dr. Zigerat to turn Toby into Faust and to unleash the spiral force. She had Doji kidnap Kyoya and put him in wolf canyon, she had Doji attack Kyoya with his Dark Wolf, she made Kyoya an opponent for Ryuga, she made Kyoya and Gingka battle each other at the world championships. Stacy also tried to kill Gingka and all of his friends so she could have Kyoya for herself. She tried to kill them through the Dark Nebula, Hades Inc. and Nemesis. Stacy had the Garcias attack Yu, she had Damien attack Yu and Tsubasa, putting them in the hospital. That was all Stacy's doing. When it all came down, Stacy realized that Kyoya had so many friends spread out across the globe. There was only one answer to that problem: She had to whipe them all out. Luckily, Stacy's plan to revive Nemesis is taking place. Once Nemesis is revived, it will destroy this world, killing off all of Kyoya's friends, as well as the rest of the human race. Everything that has happened these past five years with Stacy, The Dark Nebula and Hades Inc. was all connected to revive Nemesis. And once the human race has been killed off, it will be just Stacy and Kyoya, free to start a new human race all over again.

Stacy is addressed as Miss De Vil by Doji, Pluto, Rago, and the rest of the Nemesis bladers. Stacy laughs like Cruella De Vil and the Joker mixed into one.

Abilities: Stacy can see into the future. She knows what's gonna happen before it even happens.

Plans: Stacy plans to be the ruler of the beyblade world once it's covered with darkness forever. Stacy plans to create a one world WBBA run by her. She also plans to rename the WBBA "The House Of De Vil."

Ending: At the end of the story when Nemesis is defeated, Stacy loses all memories of who she is, who Gigi is and who their parents are. At the stadium where Gingka and Kyoy are about to battle, Mcgee and Abby arrive on the scene and Mcgee reveals that because of Stacy's amnesia, the judge sentenced her to an Insane Asylum for the next 7 years. Even though the sentence is 7 years the judge made it clear that he did not wish Stacy to ever be released.
Dequincy chapter 33 . 9/28/2014
Crimes: Stacy poisoned Leo and made him sick with that fatal illness, she had Doji send a Dark Nebula blader to Australia to arrange for Leo's blood donor to die in a car accident, she had Doji have Merci hack into all hospital records to find a patient that was a blood match for Leo. Merci found one. A small brain dead 8 year old boy. Once Doji got the blood from the 8 year old boy, Stacy passed that bag of blood off as her own. The blood that was used to save Leo's life. Stacy later had Doji have Merci to pull the plug on the brain dead 8 year old donor. Kyoya and Leo's mother worked as a child therapist and was Stacy's shrink. One day Stacy decided to reveal to Kyoya's mother everything Stacy had done from poisoning Leo to killing the donor in Australia to fake being Leo's blood donor to killing the 8 year old brain dead boy. Stacy figured that because Kyoya's mother was a therapist she could trust her (Kyoya's mother). But Stacy was wrong. One day during one of their sessions Kyoya's mother said she was going to talk to Kyoya, Leo, Amber and Riku about the session she had with Stacy where Stacy revealed everything she did. Stacy knew if Kyoya's mother did that Stacy would lose everything. But Stacy had no intention of letting that happen. So Stacy met up with Kyoya and Leo's father and asked him to kill Kyoya and Leo's mother by poisoning her. He was against it at first, but once Stacy showed him the divorce papers with Kyoya's mother's name on it, he was all on board for the ride. Especially when Stacy told him that Kyoya and Leo's mother was suing for full custody of both Kyoya and Leo. Once Kyoya's father has poisoned Kyoya's mother that just made things more easier for Stacy to woo Kyoya and to get closer to him. In fact, Stacy was there by Kyoya and Leo's side in the hospital when their mother took her last breath and passed away. So was Gigi, unfortunately. Stacy was also at the funeral and the cemetery at Kyoya's side when they buried his mother. So was Gigi. But that didn't matter because Kyoya was Stacy's now. It didn't take long for Kyoya to fall in love with Stacy, and one day he asked Stacy to be his girlfriend. Stacy said yes. One day, Gigi and Stacy's mother came to Metal Bey City and she discovered everything Stacy had done by reading Stacy's diary. When she confronted Stacy about it, she said she was going go strate to Kyoya with the truth. To prevent this from happening, Stacy pushed her down a flight of stairs, causing her to have that stroke that rendered her speechless. Stacy then took her mother on top of Mount Hagane with Doji's help, who flew her and her mother on top of the snowy mountain, where Stacy held her mother hostage in a caben. Stacy faked her death on Mount Hagane that night 3% years ago. The Stacy Gigi and the others saw crossing the frozen lake was actually a mirage created by Dr. Ziggerat. Once the mirage felling through the ice, it immediently desolved, which explains why the police never found Stacy's body. The only thing on the mirage Stacy that was real was Stacy's bey, Nibiru. Over the next 2 years, Stacy secretly stalked Kyoya, Gingka and all of their friends through the Dark Nebula to Hades Inc. to Nemesis. When Stacy saw Sandra and Kyoya on the T.V. after they won that battle, she was furious. He had fallen in love with another girl. And that was when Stacy decided that Sandra had to go. Every bad thing that happened to Sandra from the day she met Kyoya was all orchestrated by Stacy. Messagog finding Sandra, Kyoya's father attacking Sandra, and When Sandra's grandmother almost lost the ranch. Stacy stole six million pounds out of Sandra's grandmother's bank account. When Stacy learned that Kyoya's father had been arrested by the NCIS for the murder of his ex-wife, she knew that it was only a matter of time before he ratted her out to the police. So Stacy opened a portal to the other world and freed the evil Sandra and asked her to by Kyoya's father something to eat and drink and to spike it with poison. She also told the evil Sandra to place an empty bottle in his hand to make it look like a suicide. When Stacy heard on the WBBA news that Kyoya's father's death was ruled a suicide, she knew she was in the clear.
Dequincy chapter 33 . 9/28/2014
Great chapter! Cant wait for the next one. And i'm glad to hear that you're using my last OC.

Stacy De Vil.

Age: 18.

Stacy is the older daughter of Cherleen and Henry Fiasco and the older sister of Gigi Fiasco.

Appearance: Stacy is a foot taller then Gigi, she has bleach blond hair, pale chalk white skin and blue eyes. She is very beautiful, like Gigi, she is creepy and Intimedating, She wears black eye shadow that goes up to her eyebrows, black eyeliner on her bottom eyelids, black lipstick and a black headband. She also wears a black quarter length sleeve fur coat that stops at her upper back, she wears a long black fur cape that goes all the way down to the ground, a pair of golden sharp shoulder pads on the cape, a pair of black, skin tight gloves that cover her whole arms, a pair of long sharp golden fingernails on the fingers of the gloves, she wears a black shirt underneath the fur coat, a black mini skirt, a pair of black stockings that cover her whole legs, a pair of black high-heel shoes, and she holds a long sliver glitter coded siggeret holder she uses to smoke siggerets with. She wears a long, black feather Boa that is rapped around both of her arms. She carries a black fur purse (That contains the gun she pulled on Gigi two years ago.). Stacy also drives a black and white panther deville car that looks just like Cruella Devil's.

Personality: Evil, ambitious, greedy, power hungry, relentless, rude, reckless, psychotic, egotistical, bipolar, short tempered, controlling, cruel, ruthless, sadistic, narcissistic and emotionless. Stacy's personality is just like Cruella Devil's personality. She is shown to be psycho and unstable. She is obsessed with Kyoya and thinks that no one can be in his life but her. She is also shown to be a sociopath. Stacy always has this calm blank look on her face. She feels no emotion. She doesn't feel happiness, anger, love, sadness or any kind of emotion. She is always in a calm calculated mood. Lying is not a problem for Stacy. She lies so much she thinks she's telling the truth. In Stacy's eyes, Gigi has "The Perfect Life." Everything in Gigi's life is picture perfect. Nothing in Gigi's life can ever go wrong. A life that Stacy once had before Gigi stole it from her.

Description: Before the events of Beyblade Metal Fusion, Masters and Fury, Stacy, as a little girl, felt neglected by her parents, Cherleen and Henry, in favor of her younger sister, Gigi. At times, Stacy got along very well with Gigi, but because of the lack of attention she also finds herself jealous of Gigi, sometimes wishing she (Stacy) was an only child. No matter what Stacy ever did in her life, Gigi always had to copy her. Gigi liked the same things Stacy did. The same music, the same singers and dancers, the same sports, the same movies and T.V. shows. And for a while Stacy thought it was cute. After all, Gigi is her younger sister. But as the years went on it just got to be too much. In Stacy's eyes, Gigi stole her life from her.

Beyblade: Hydra L-Drago. This bey is gold and looks like a huge, 3-D golden Hydra dragon with 8 heads and dragon wings. The heads of the dragon form sometimes hit both the opponent bey and the blader, injuring them both.

Attacks: Twister, Dragon Tail, Dragon Rush, Dragon Dance, Outrage, Dragon Breath, Dragon Pulse, and Dragon Rage.

Special Move: Draco Meteor. (Draco Meteor deals damage to both the opponent bey and the opponent blader. Comets are also summoned down from the sky.)
Beast Princess chapter 33 . 9/28/2014
Hi. I've been reading your stories and I think that they're really good! Any way, if it's possible can you use my OC? Here's her profile...
Name: Jasmine Tategami
Age: 14
Bey: Cosmic Galleon (It is not a legendary bey, she got it from Kyoya, though Ginka and the others don't know about her. Only Kyoya and Leo does because she's their sister)
Bey beast: A golden male lion with angel wings on its back
Special moves
Lion Gale force wall
Pride Of Fury: a green gem appears on its forehead and a fire hurricane forms in front of Galleon and is sent to its opponent
Wing Storm Strike: Galleon's wings creates a storm and sends lightning to its opponent
Appearance: she has long forest green hair that reach her waist and blue eyes. She wears a pink shirt with sleeves that reach her elbows, golden vest like Kyoya's that match her leggings, silver belt to carry her bey gear and silver fingerless gloves and fuchsia hiking boots that reach her knees. She also uses a pink-heart pendant that hangs from a golden-chain necklace.

History: she left on her own training journey in the age of 12. She took Leo to Kyoya so that he can take care of him. She met up with Sandra and asks if Sandra knows where her brothers are which Sandra answers that Leo is with them while Kyoya isn't. After that, Jasmine and Leo were reunited and she helps Sandra in stopping her evil twin.
If there's anything else you need to know about her then P.M me

Thanks.
Dequincy chapter 32 . 7/1/2014
Here's another thing to know about Stacy: She laughs like Cruella De Vil.
Dequincy chapter 32 . 6/30/2014
Stacy's Crimes against Gigi and Kyoya: Stacy poisoned Leo and made him sick with that fatal illness by spiking his food with poison, she had Doji send one of his Dark Nebula Bladers to Australia and cause the blood donor to die in a car accident, she had Doji steal a bag of blood from a brain dead blood donor and passed it off as her own to make it look like she saved Leo's life. She then had the plug pulled on the brain dead donor. She had Kyoya's father kill his mother because she had found out what Stacy had done. She caused her mother, Cherleen, to have a stroke by poisoning her food. Stacy faked her own death. The Stacy that Gigi and the others saw that night on the ice was a mirage that she had Doji have Merci create. When the mirage fell through the ice, it immediently disappeared, which is why the police never found Stacy. The only thing on the mirage that was real was Stacy's bey, Nibiru, which is also why the police only found the bey.

Car: Stacy drives a 3-D black and white panther deville car. This car looks just like Cruella De Vil's car in the live action version of "101 dalmatians". This car is parked outside the Mayan Temple. On Nemesis Island, it's parked outside the temple.

Intentions: Stacy plans to marry Kyoya and to bring the world together as one world. Stacy calls this "The New World Order." She plans to be a one world WBBA director of the whole world. She also plans to rename all the WBBA's in the world "The House Of De Vil." Even though she'll still be under Nemesis's, Stacy will still be the ruler of the whole world.

Stacy's Crimes against Gingka and friends: Stacy told Dr. Zierate ware L-Drago was and he told Doji and Ryuga. She had Doji kidnap Kyoya and put him in wolf canyon, she had Doji attack Kyoya with his Dark Wolf, she made Kyoya Ryuga's next opponent, pretended to be friends with Massamune, Zeo and Toby, she secretly poisoned Toby and made him sick with that illness. She encouraged Massamune to leave the country to find Gingka, she secretly arranged for Dr. Ziggerat and Zeo to meet, she had the Garcias attack Yu, she had Damien attack Yu and Tsubasa which put them in comas for the rest of the world championships, she had Dr. Zigerrat give Toby the arrangement that turned him into Faust, she had Dr. Zigerrat unleash the spiral force, as well a list of other crimes against Gingka and all of his friends.

Crimes against Sandra: Stacy had Kyoya's father attack Sandra with his bey Dark Striker, She hacked into Sandra's Grandmother's bank account and stole a huge amount of money, which is why Sandra's grandmother almost lost the Ranch. She told Messagog where Sandra was, she freed the Evil Sandra from the other world and had her kill Kyoya's father to set the real Sandra up for murder so she (Stacy) could get her (Sandra) out of the way and have Kyoya all for herself. She also sent Neptune after Sandra.
Dequincy chapter 32 . 6/30/2014
This is the last OC.

Stacy De Vil.

Age: 18.

Stacy is the older sister of Gigi and the older daughter of Cherleen and Henry. Stacy makes her appearance known at the Mayan Temple in Mexico after Doji reveals himself and reveals that everything that Stacy, The Dark Nebula and Hades Inc. did was all connected to revive the god of destruction, Nemesis. Stacy is addressed as "Miss De Vil" by Pluto, Rago, Doji, Johannes, Cycnus, Hershel, and Keyser.

First Appearance: Stacy is a foot taller then Gigi, she has pale skin that is the color white, bleach blond hair, blue eyes, she wares black eye shadow that goes up to her eyebrows, she wares black eye liner on her bottom eye lids, and she wares black lipstick. She wares a black quorterlenth sleeved fur coat that stops at her upper back, a pair of black skin tight gloves that cover her whole arms, a pair of long golden sharp finger nails, she wares a black headband in her hair, a black shirt underneath the black fur coat, a black mini skirt, a pair of black stockings that cover her whole legs, she wares a pair of black high-heel shoes, a long black fur cape that douches the ground, she wares a long black feather Boa that's rapped around both of her arms, the parts of the Boa that hang from both of her arms nearly touch the ground. She also holds a long red ciggaret holder with a smoking ciggeret in it.

Second Appearance: On Nemesis Island, Stacy wares a glitter white long sleeve wedding dress with the shoulder part of the sleeves puffy, she still has on her black eye shadow that goes up to her eyebrows, her black eye liner on her bottom eye lids, and her black lipstick, and she wares a long white veil that goes down to the ground and a pair of glitter white high heel shoes, even though the dress covers her feet. This time Stacy want's to marry Kyoya.

Personality: Cruel, sadistic, relentless, rude, reckless, decadent, chic, egotistical, bipolar, greedy, evil, controlling, selfish, calm and calculated, emotionless, and short-tempered. Stacy's personality is the same as Cruella De Vil's personality. Stacy is obsessed with Kyoya and fur clothing, but she's obsessed with Kyoya the most. Stacy feels no type of emotion. She doesn't feel sad, happy, anger, love, or any kind of emotion. Stacy is always in a calm calculated move, and she never gets serious, even when she knows she's going to lose. Stacy also brags about how she has never ever lost a bey battle in her life. Stacy is jealous of Gigi. She has secretly hated Gigi since they were little girls. She thinks that Gigi is the evil one and has been Trying to steal Stacy's life since the day she (Gigi) came into this world. No matter what Stacy did in her life, Gigi always had to copy her. She liked the same things that Stacy liked. She (Gigi) liked the same singers, the same movies, the same T.V. shows, the same cloths, the same colors, the same actors and actresses, and even the same sports as Stacy did. And for a while Stacy thought it was great. After all, Gigi is her younger sister. But as the years went on, it just got to be too much. Stacy thinks that she is the only girl who can have Kyoya. When Stacy get's mad, she screams in anger at the top of her lungs and goes into a huge rage. Stacy would risk anything just to be with Kyoya. She loves him more then anything. She loves him more then Gigi, more then Mom, more then Dad. Stacy thinks that she and Kyoya are meant to be together and that "This is fate."

Abilities: Stacy is psychic. She can see into the whatever she wants in the future. She knows what's gonna happen before it even happens. She knows that Riku is an undercover agent working for the WBBA and that those phone calls he has been getting are from Mom and Dad, she knows that Gigi is a singer and an actress and starred in several movies and T.V. shows. She knows that Amber is a fashion designer and a model. She also knows that Lady Shadow is traviling with Ryuga, Emma and Kenta and that they are on their way here to the Mayan temple right now. She also knows that Sandra has been lying to Kyoya for days, just like Gigi lied to him for a whole year about Stacy. Stacy knows that Sandra's evil self escaped from the other world and that Sandra lied to the NCIS about Kyoya and Leo's father's suicide. Stacy's knows that the NCIS are still investigating Kyoya's father's death and that they are on the verge are finding out that it was murder. Stacy's eyes glow gold whenever she has a vision. Stacy is also able to control the dark power of Nemesis like Pluto and Rago.

Beyblade: Hydra L-Drago. This bey is gold and looks like a 3-D version of L-Drago when in it's beast form, except it's golden and has eight heads and gold dragon wings.

Attacks: Dragon Rage, Flamethrower, Dragon Breath, Dragon Pulse, Outrage, Dragon Claw, and Dragon Tail. Stacy uses this bey to aid Rago in his fight against to legendary bladers.

Special Move: Draco Meteor.
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