|Reviews for Gosan Matawa Kainyū|
| Tempest NightMoon chapter 3 . 9/19/2013
Just keep going as is, a new take on the actual story is refreshing
| war sage chapter 3 . 9/19/2013
| Mithos Yggdrassil chapter 3 . 9/18/2013
Redo to better follow canon I believe.
If you intend to follow the plot that canon has given then I think you have no choice.
The Sage's backstory was revealed along with his mother's somewhat. So it could be figured in the story in some way. Maybe not by taking liberties with the backstory but by keeping it vague. And thus, your main character could have knowledge and information not normally known by others. Kurama would be friendly to your character as well, being helped by its father would undoubtedly further the relationship along. Finally, the Sage would disappear and your story would follow your own storyline.
Ultimately, it is what you choose it to be.
| Ivansama chapter 3 . 9/18/2013
i think you should just continue this story
| Shissei chapter 3 . 9/18/2013
I think that you should do whatever you want. You've started a really good story, and despite a few discrepancies with canon, it could still work out. I look forward to your decision either way. :)
| Duesal10 chapter 3 . 9/18/2013
Just continue. My own story was made obsolete by the manga, so I'm just changing it to slightly AU.
| Guest chapter 3 . 9/18/2013
| Dingo Wilds chapter 3 . 9/18/2013
Cannon has gone to shit, continue as you were. no giant pansy flower has the right to control what you do.
| Hoytti chapter 3 . 9/18/2013
Continue please, I liked your story so far.
| Super Vegito 2 chapter 2 . 8/19/2013
The ten tails is more than a thousand times more powerfull then the nine tails
| madara uchiha chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
i love i like the plot its good please keep writing
| Shizuka-naru Goketsu chapter 2 . 7/4/2013
Yanno I honestly can't wait to see what will happen when the various bad guys here about this and you know they will because shit like that happens in fanfiction! Despite being military villages rumors and shit seem to seep out of the hidden villages all the time so it's only a matter of time until we have Orochimaru, the Akatsuki ( specifically Nagato ), and Obito himself investigating this Sage of Six Paths.
| The blood moon chapter 2 . 7/2/2013
Continue with this story it pisses me off wen theres a good story but the writer suddenly stops
| wt183 chapter 2 . 6/16/2013
Wow this is a awesome story! please update soon!
| theonedevin chapter 2 . 6/6/2013
I can't wait for obito reaction