|Reviews for Gosan Matawa Kainyū|
| Ten no kaitou chapter 2 . 6/5/2013
awesome story can't wait to see how strong naru will become also it seems like anko might get some training too orochimaru better watch out
| Sigmatic chapter 2 . 5/17/2013
Amazing, I love how much consideration you put into each character. Choosing Genji as the protagonist was ingenious as well, I can't wait to see what else is in store.
| ShinobiTwin05 chapter 2 . 4/29/2013
Yay! This is so amazing! It's hard finding these kind of stories without the plot being shot to hell making the characters so overpowered that it's laughable even in anime standards. :D
Wonder if the Rikudo Sennin will meet the other Jinchuuriki in their travels and talk to their respective Bijuus? I can see them all clambering for his attention or yelling at their containers to go say hi and fawn over him... ;3
And then I laugh if he ever saw HIDAN spouting off Jashinism and being all, 'You're KILLING INNOCENTS? Die!' :P
Tobi (Obito), you're screwed man... :3
| Duesal10 chapter 2 . 4/26/2013
Okay, let's get down to it. You messed up with the council.
Mistake #1: They immediately believed that the sage was indeed the sage, despite the two thousand year time difference.
Mistake #2: The council was way too brave in the face of the 'God of Shinobi' especially the civilians. I get it, you feel like you need to bash the council. But it's just unrealistic to have them wetting their pants at one moment and screaming bloody murder in the next.
Other than that, I really don't see why you felt the need to toss the Sandaime around like a rag-doll. Sure he was neglectful of Naruko, but he wasn't evil.
Don't get me wrong, I do actually enjoy reading this story. However, the above mentioned details just make it seem like the standard bashing story with a god-like character who can do whatever the hell he feels like... You had a really good start too. I mean, the next thing you know, Jiraya will be slaughtered for distancing himself from Naruko, despite the fact that it was for her own safety.
But besides the bashing (which really got on my nerves) it was in fact a decent and well-thought-out chapter! Keep updating, but please avoid bashing. Character flaws are fine, like an exceptional pride for the Hyuuga or the Uchiha, but bashing just destroys a story if it isn't humorous at all.
I'll look forward to the nest update!
| Valentine03 chapter 2 . 4/25/2013
Omg, I love how you got Genji to chew out everyone. Seriously, I thought I was the only one that thought that Naruto's situation was fucked up even if he say's he has no hard feeling's in the anime and such.
I'm super excited for the next chapter. Btw is there going to be some kind of fling going on between Genji and Anko? Because that would kinda be funny. :P
| Valentine03 chapter 1 . 4/25/2013
WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU PEOPLE!?
You should totally freaking REVIEW! This is a really great story!
Anyways great job, its really interesting and the first so far I have come across a story like this. :P
| Darksoul2142 chapter 2 . 4/25/2013
So about the Rikudou Sennin in the future will he be affiliated with Konoha or will just remained detached from it? Hehehehe if he is affiliated I can only imagine the faces of the shinobi in the other Hidden Villages. Hehehehe kkukukuku :P
| thunder18 chapter 2 . 4/24/2013
Great chapter Update soon
| TheBlackSeaReaper chapter 2 . 4/23/2013
awesome fic. love it a lot. cant wait to read more. keep up the wonderful writing. update soon please and good luck with the next chapter.
| Lord of the weed chapter 2 . 4/23/2013
Only one word comes to my mind to describe this story till now... AMAZING!
I like your writing, Genji as a character and plotwise I have nothing to criticize, which is actually very rare. Curious how Naruko will turn out with Anko as a female role model and Kyuubi as her nii-san.
I thought Danzo might use Kotoamatsukami to make Genji turn him into the Hokage during that meeting. I never understood why he didn't use that on Hiruzen in the first place.
Jiraiya should stay far far away from Genji for neglecting his godfather duties, considering how pissed he was at Hiruzen. After Anko tells him about Orochimaru he might want to pay the snake a visit too and Obito, oh, please make Genji shove that mask up his ass, it's a personal request lol nah not serious, I just can't stand that guy and hope he gets what he deserves and not forgiveness.
Well, with that being said this story goes right into my favourites. I'm really excited to see where this story is going. Stay awesome.
| Hoytti chapter 2 . 4/23/2013
Wonderfully done, I'd have to say that I've been hooked; hook, line, and sinker. Due to the end of this chapter, I'm going to take a wild guess and say at least Anko is going to fall in love with Genji, who might return the love eventually. Naruko might find a lover later on as well.
| OldMasterSaru chapter 2 . 4/23/2013
O.o was that EMS when he channel a little juubi there? I really liking the story so far...question will she be getting the Rinnegan? I know it been over done but this story would feel right granting her that...
| odraudekire chapter 2 . 4/22/2013
Wow, he really has strong beliefs.
Also poor hokage knowing that he is facing the most powerful being that has existed he can only agree to the demands of Genji. Excellent story I hope you continue doing it.
| Duesal10 chapter 1 . 3/22/2013
Well, you're not the first to try out the sage-come-to-future idea, and you certainly won't be the last, but your fanfic is the most believable I've seen. The chapter flowed very smoothly overall. Nice touch with the Rikudou Sennin's mindscape.
| odraudekire chapter 1 . 3/18/2013
Excellent history, I mean, I have never read something like this before, besides I really like your Genji character. I think he can be a good father figure for naruko.