Reviews for Number 8 |
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![]() ![]() I thought angel was kind of occ, i was fine with it because I don't like angels character anyway. I thought you did well enough with ender, just make sure to keep him as a character who hates fighting and is kind of haunted, I still get orson scott card is hard to imitate though |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() Plz update. This is great. |
![]() ![]() This looks really cool. Please continue! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my gosh this is so good please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() PLEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSEEEEEEE CONTINUE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue this is really good |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update! |
![]() ![]() Love it! Can't wait for your next update! |
![]() ![]() this is one of the best things i have ever seen i hope it continues |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ender is smarter than making up stuff in his mind...I hope he's not gonna turn out a wimp in your fanfic.;):) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've never actually read Maximum Ride (I could never find the first book, and I prefer to start a series chronologically), bt I think this chapter was well written. Twelve? This is pretty good then. I like the fact that you write Ender as silent but not quite shy. It's a good balance. |