Reviews for Gallifreyan Dentistry
Pocket Full of Pens chapter 21 . 1/10/2014
Hi! Found this because BloodLily16 cited it as an inspiration for her story and I just love this sort of idea. I like the way everyone is incorporated, espically the TARDIS, very clever. Another chapter on her would be nice but I have no idea what it'd be about. I'm confused on what pairings to support while reading this, though. I ship 9/Rose as well as 10/Rose (not to mention the fact I ship 11/River and Whofflé). As for incorporating Martha, I wouldn't worry about it if I were you, I haven't been able to think up anything that would make a good story about her. Great fic, though!
Guest chapter 21 . 10/31/2013
Guest chapter 21 . 9/25/2013
More nine/rose :) So good though!
BloodLily16 chapter 21 . 9/25/2013
While married to him? ;)
aintevenbovvered chapter 20 . 9/1/2013
This was really adorable :)

As for prompts, I know Ive already said this before, but i think you should definitely do one where River and Matt first learn about her infertility. That would be so angsty and amazing all at the same time.
Also, im ok with with one where Chris is just remembering his past family before they died. You could show us what his life was like and who his children were before the tragedy.
Keep up the good work!
LaClaireFolie chapter 20 . 8/30/2013
Hey :)

First off, I really love this story to bits, even the wibbly - wobbley part of it were some chapters clearly take place after others, but are posted before (like the chapters 20 and 11) and I love the dynamics between certain characters, like Amy&Rory, Rose&Chris, Donna&David and Donna&Jack.

However, I didn't particularly like the Martha-chapter because she seemed so entirely un - Martha and because I didn't like Tara's interaction with her, although I do generally like Tara.

I loved the Clara & Matt chapter, however, because it was kind of like them, like the Doctor and Clara, and I'm really, really, really curious in which direction this all is going to evolve. Do you happen to ship Clara and the Doctor?

I also really like River and the Doctor, for some reason, even though I can't stand them in the original series. Maybe that's because River is so clearly Moffat's favorite and seems to me a bit Mary Sue-ish with her overperfection while in this story she is far more human and flawed, which makes her more like - and believable.

About the things you asked in your Author's Note... if you are looking for a new title, why don't you use the address of the building, 1119 Davies (sorry if I got it wrong...)?
And when it comes to prompts, weeeeeeell... I'd love to see Chris, David and Matt interact, possibly just the three of them, maybe having a drink somewhere or something. And I'd love some more stuff on River/Matt, especially on their past and why their marriage is so troubled (possibly ending?) at the moment, and something on Chris and Tara. Aaaaaaand, if possible, I would love, love, love a chapter where Clara and Matt meet in the laundry room (if such a thing exists in the building) and she is just taking out her knickers and bras and Clara flirts with him and he gets all flustered and embarrassed. I would be eternally grateful for that one!

Love, ClaireFolie
QueenOfBeasts chapter 20 . 8/30/2013
This probably a bad idea and way to early for it and it won't work and it's so cliche but I'm hitting a wall so here it is. *breath*

Halloween party at the Weeping Angel. Amy goes into labor while there.

I'm gonna go cry in my corner now.
Guest chapter 19 . 8/15/2013
U shud bring in the master as one of their evil brothers! Heheheeee
kazster chapter 19 . 8/15/2013
Martha meeting Rose's friend Mickey. chapter 19 . 8/14/2013
i think that Donna should start seeing a guy seriously and they should accidently run into a jealous jack and an overprotected david at Clara's bakery as clara attempts to invite them to her party.
Himelda Window chapter 18 . 8/14/2013
You should do one where Clara meets Matt. You should do at least one Clara story.
Oh, by the way, I really like Gallifreyan Dentistry. I started it a while ago, and got away from it. But now that I found it again, I don't wanna let it go!
Keep it up!
QueenOfBeasts chapter 18 . 8/11/2013
Well the next logical step is to write the wedding of course! :)
Or if not that, Donna complaining that her bridesmaid dress makes her look fat and David putting on the same dress to prove that it could be much worse.
aintevenbovvered chapter 18 . 8/7/2013
You have NO IDEA how much i am looking forward to seeing Donna and David go to the wedding together :p . Update soon!
Although how come Donna didnt ask Jack to go with her instead of David? i mean, it would make sense- they see each other EVERY DAY and most likely spend a lot of quality time with each other while working.
Speaking of Jack, could you do a prompt where like he and River bump into each other in the hallway? I want to see some hard-core flirting. Because flirting is excellent ;)
XxKicking Your AxX chapter 18 . 8/5/2013
I think you should post a Clara chapter. Just a thought! Post soon!
DarthAbby chapter 18 . 8/5/2013
Ooh please please please write the wedding! Donna and David can dance and make faces at Lily and Lance and make snarky comments about some of the more hideous outfits usually seen at weddings. And then Jack shows up because he's Jack and ruins the reception for everyone else and goes off laughing with David and Donna and the reader.

Sorry. That was pure word vomit. I just got excited with the idea and...yeah. Anyways. It was a really good chapter! Looking forward to more!
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