|Reviews for Red Storm|
| Kaida-chan Rumir chapter 15 . 3/8
Please please PLEASE update! I am addicted to this story!
| dylandemon999 chapter 15 . 2/13
Finally is freaking right this chapter was awesome thank you for taking your time to write this fanfic it is one of the best narusasu stories ever
| jammer99 chapter 15 . 1/30
So good! Update! Do it or I'll hunt you down! Haha just kidsing don't be offended. Or am I? No, seriously though I wanna,read more so uhh... ITS TIME TO FORGET ABOUT YOUR ACTUAL LIFE AND KICK IT INO HIGH GEAR! Mama's gettin antsy!
| Insanity's Replica chapter 1 . 1/15
I read the first part a while ago, so I'm a little hazy on some parts of it. But I'm impressed that you managed to carry this story so far without having readers going to the first part to understand the second. It's pretty good as a stand-alone! Some parts of the story managed to "unhaze" some of my memories about the first one so awesome job! :)
I like the slow development of their relationship and I completely agree with the fact that their romance would've probably been too overwhelming and misplaced if it had been done in the first story, Naruto's mental state was probably a bitch to write anyway, add the fact he was into his best friend while being sexually abused would've made anyone's head explode. Realistically speaking, it was a wise choice to only put hints, characters had too much going on.
I also like the natural flow of dialogues that you write!
Overall I think this is a fantastic story and the development of the plot/relationship is going at a moderate pace. Don't let anyone tell you you're rushing it, or dragging it out. On the contrary, it's moving along quite nicely!
Anyway, I look forward to reading more of your work and the rest of this story!
Good luck :)
| HoneyBee137 chapter 15 . 1/10
The title for this chapter speaks for itself. Finally. FINALLY. I was grinning like a damn ass idiot and couldn't help the dreamy sigh or fangirlish squeal that escaped my lips. But really, 200,000 words TWO-HUNDRED-THOUSAND WORDS and finally, FINALLY, I get to see some action. I applaud you and your obvious efforts to keep the ball rolling and not load more angst on.
I really believe that you can get to know someone by reading their writing, and you, my friend, are someone I know rather well by now. You're a sweet, unassuming girl in person, but on the inside you thrive off the angst you read in stories and see in movies, you're inner psyche is sadistic and you let that side of you run wild in your writing. I think I'd like to be your friend, and as long as you don't go all nutty on my and treat me like you treat Naruto, I think we'd have a beautiful relationship. :)
*sigh* I really did go a little overboard with the reviews though didn't I? In my defense I've been holed up at my house for the past seven days trying to get over a series of colds/flus that have assaulted my unsuspecting person. Funny story: today I used up ALL the tissues in my house and was frantically running around looking for something to blow my nose with because the snot was threatening to DRIP OUT OF MY NOSE, I was so panicked that I tripped over my dog's bed and face planted on my cold wood floor. There was nobody home so I allowed myself a good fifteen minutes to silently wallow in my own pain, unmoving as snot dripped from my nose to create a little pool on the floor... I've seen better days...
But really, this is a really special and fantastic story. I was actually really hesitant to read it at first because it seemed to be a little TOO angsty for me, but really, is there such a thing? Plus I've been eyeing this fic for a good long while, waiting for a time when I was depressed enough to want to read something that could depress me even more... then mother nature brought my monthly gift and I turned into a sick hobgoblin and the rest, as they say, is history. I really am glad I started reading this though, and I simply cannot wait for your next installment! But here's where I have to kick your ass a bit: didn't you say weekly updates? So what the hell is this shit? Haven't updated since fucking September!? The hell bro?!
Alas, I know all too well the curse of writer's block *sigh* if you should ever need a good bought of inspiration, please don't hesitate to message me XD I'd love to help you with your writing (kinda a guilty pleasure of mine) I'd also really love to be your beta because I couldn't help but notice some pretty glaring errors in this series. But if you already have a beta then forget I asked but they clearly aren't doing their jobs very well if they let you publish THAT (no offense, I'm just quite the grammar nazi).
So yeah... as soon as you look to see all my damn ass reviews I'm pretty sure you're going to think I'm some crazed bipolar stalker lady with no life... which I suppose is partially true on all accounts considering recent events, but I assure you that I am a relatively normal girl. I'm just a big fan of Naruto/amature writing/good reads/reading in general. I look forward to your next chapter! I'm eagerly awaiting how you're going to make their lives a living hell next XD
| HoneyBee137 chapter 14 . 1/10
Jesus fucking gawd damn. Naruto always gets captured doesn't he? Bitches dude...
| HoneyBee137 chapter 13 . 1/10
Yeah! Go Sasuke! Fucking kick their good for nothing asses! WOOOOOOH!
| HoneyBee137 chapter 12 . 1/10
Awwww, those two are even friend's outside of your crazy assholish world you create for them XD
But seriously, that AN at the end nearly killed me with laughter, you must be insane my friend, for that was off the rocker.
| HoneyBee137 chapter 11 . 1/10
Geez you're an asshole to Naruto. And here I thought you were mainly focusing your wrath on Sasuke in this sequel. But damn dude, you made them pee on his clothes and semi-rape him again... you are one sadistic bastard. But I sorta love it so I'm not complaining too much XD
| HoneyBee137 chapter 10 . 1/9
FRUSTRATION. ALL THERE IS IS FRUSTRATION. FUCKING HIWE9OHFIOEHOISJIOHE SAI!
UGH. Now there's just one more problem to sort out. Should've checked the stalls before the steamy kiss and love confession, dayum.
| HoneyBee137 chapter 9 . 1/9
I really like Hidan right now. Like, the dude just says a few things and FINALLY get the gears moving in Naruto's rusty head. *sigh* Plus Hidan is kinda a sexy character... even though he's a TOTAL weirdo, I kinda want to get in his pants, ya know what I mean?
| HoneyBee137 chapter 8 . 1/9
Frustration. Pure frustration. That's all I feel from this chapter. I mean, god dammit dude! You FINALLY put some sasunaru in only to make Naruto freak the fuck out and have crazy Orochimaru flashbacks! UGH! Sasuke should be the light at the end of the tunnel, the fire that burns but keeps the shadows at bay, I mean you could've gone all mushy and poetic and lovely and instead you give me this FRUSTRATING shit? UGH!
| HoneyBee137 chapter 7 . 1/9
Ugh. This story is like my life right now... I've been sick for like six days now and have been spending all my down time reading fanfiction. I'm so pathetic!
| HoneyBee137 chapter 6 . 1/9
So you've stopped torturing Naruto and moved right along to Sasuke, eh? You sadistic author you XD
I can't say I don't love it, the cluelessness of Naruto sorta reminds me of a little lost rabbit!
And about the stories you're planning on writing, here are my reading recommendations for you: Be My Hero by dmnq8 (Really a great story, the character are SUPER fucked up and there's so much angst it's crazy. But the emotions are raw and SO real that the characters seem like real people and suddenly the story isn't about some stupid sappy couple, but about real people that have lead tough lives and and have to face themselves before they can face others. It IS a NaruSasu fic, which I love, but I'm aware you probably don't fancy those. The smut doesn't come for a LONG ASS TIME though, but when it does... let's just say the wait was definitely worth it XD) Sasuke Says by FastForward (My DAYUM this is a good fic, I was seriously OBSESSED with it for a little while. I didn't really like FastForward's most popular fic, Roommates, so I was really surprised that I liked this story as much as I did. It's about Sasuke and Itachi kidnapping Naruto to get revenge on Naruto's Father for running their business into the ground. But the Uchiha boy's didn't plan on Sasuke and Naruto falling for each other XD EEK fangirl out! I love that plot scenario and it works really well, plus the story is hilarious (but not ridiculous, mind you) and I just all around love all the angst and fluff as well as a smidgen of action that the author throws in there. It's just wonderful, plus it's SasuNaru! Right up your ally!) Save Me by dmnq8 (This is a fic that's really close to your idea of the whole scrappy captain X socially superior person thing. I fucking loved this fic, I reviewed it tons and squealed at every scrap of fluff and creative plot twist that sprung up. It's super angsty and the emotions are raw and real (this author is one that I'm especially fond of, the characters and relationships are really skillfully displayed in every single fic that I've read by her, plus the plots are fantastic) I recommend all dmnq8's stuff by the way, they're all worth the read.) SlackerXHacker by VioletWylde (Oh... I cannot say enough good things about this fic, it's what first got me into NaruSasu too! It has a really cool plot and has enough angst for me to be pleasantly frustrated with the characters but not enough for the relationship to go absolutely nowhere. I actually couldn't help but think of this fic while I was reading "Cloud Cover" so I think you'd like it even though it's a NaruSasu work.) Torrid by KageKitsune XXX (This quite possibly could be my favorite fic on this site, that and "We Three" of course. It's just... perfect. And I've been itching to reread it again, it's that good. The plot is simply DELICIOUS and there's so much angst and love and fucking METAPHORS it's seriously a classic in my book. Though, it is a bit smutty even in the beginning and it IS a narusasu but that's just a bonus for me, ya know? And if you've never tried NaruSasu or just have never found anything that you like that's NaruSasu, my recommendation is this fic right here. It's damn near perfect in my book, even though there is a rather long streak of SUPER angst near the end of the story, it just makes the ending all the more satisfying in the end. Seriously go read this. You won't regret it... I hope?) Amatores by VioletWylde (Oh DAYUM this is my current obsession (besides this fic of course) I rarely RARELY read ongoing fics because I'm in constant fear that the author won't continue their works and leave me hanging or simply get bored with updating or writers block (*gasp* Heaven forbid!) but it's a REALLY good historical fanfic, the best I've read on here anyways. AND it's uber angsty so you won't have a problem with it, though it's also frustrating, it's gratifying because the author gives you these tiny little scraps of a moment between the two lovebirds so that it's worth all the heart wrenching moments that make up this fic. *sighs* it is a NaruSasu though... jeez I wish you liked both. It'd be much easier to give you recommendations then.) and of course, We Three by Cannibal Incorporated (You don't understand how good this fic is, it's my absolute favorite and outshines all the other fics that I've recommended so far. Plus it fits your tastes to a tee. It's TOTALLY angsty, with beautiful metaphors and stunning imagery that honestly brought me to tears, it's a sasunaru relationship which I'm strangely happy with, the supporting characters are PEOPLE and you get to know them and love them without the story getting needlessly consumed by them and their stories, and the entire emotional journey that Naruto takes is breathtakingly real. It's seriously THAT wonderful. The story is real and relatable, the characters are so HUMAN it's mind blowing, and I just seriously love the way Naruto deals with his feelings and the way that Sasuke isn't really a part of the story, yet the story is all about HIM, much like your prequel "Cloud Cover", it's more about the path Naruto chooses to take to deal with his feelings than than the true destination he arrives at. It's a sad story, but not in the way that your story was sad; this story pull on the heartstrings indirectly and sneakily but it still got me wailing at the simple beauty of it all. If you don't listen to any of my other story recommendations and just read this fic I'll be beyond happy. I catch myself pondering over this fic and sighing over it even though it's been more than a year since I've read the thing. I also really want to reread this fic, it's fantastic. So here's my challenge to you: look beneath the surface of this fic and REALLY TRY to understand EVERY character and their motives, you'll get more out of it that way.)
So yeah... once I get started talking about the fics I like I just can't seem to stop! Please take my recommendations and run with them though! If you do you're in for some seriously good reading XD
On to the next chapter!
| HoneyBee137 chapter 5 . 1/9
Jesus. Naruto is not going to be too pleased with the idea of Sasuke butt fucking him is he? *sigh* If only Sasuke would man up a little bit and tell Naruto that he likes him. Then Naruto could sort out his feelings and see that their relationship could be a beautiful thing. Alas, nothing is ever that easy is it? Poor Naru-chan, I just wanna give him a big old bear hug and tuck him into Sasuke's bed... then Sasuke could help fight Naruto's nightmares with him.