Amazing story! Brilliantly written I hope you continue writing stories! Hopefully you finish this one day! Excellent job showing the dark side of shinobi and konoha, the anime makes the leaf look like the good guys but in actuality they are just the same as other villages, killers for hire.

This arc is taking too long, I'll welcome the next one withh open arms.

It's very good, it's been a few weeks that I haven't found a story so interesting, lively and well written. Your characters feel alive, lik me real people.

My heart aches for Mae. Just thinking about how the Takashi imagining her as someone else made me cry for her. I wish she could at least reunite with Naruto.

Top story which is taking a completely novel direction. Criminally low number of reviews

Your usage of soma or kun is a little off...please don't use it unless your character is speaking to another person or out loud

Nice to see Mae again! You have a lot of plot threads, just waiting for the mother of all snarls.

I really love the character development of Yuji, and the OCs as well. The world building is superb. Please keep up the good work.

Sucks nothing new

Messing with the ninja system as a whole is one of my favourite plot bunnies of all time! A seriously beautifully written story, I can't wait for more!

Why tf are they going clubbing

This fic is getting so fucking annoying with these modern terms and everything wtf is this trash

In Naruto canon, a single S-rank ninja can defeat a Biju. Kurama might be something of an exception, but he's the strongest of the Biju. In this fic, Kurama is basically unstoppable. If not for that One Weird Spinny-Eye Trick, he and Naruto are basically able to steamroll over every ninja everywhere. It's nearly impossible to remain invested in a story where a character is basically unstoppable and insta-wins every physical and social conflict. In canon, that's what happened with Madara. Here, it's Kurama.

It's sad and hilarious that almost all of this could have been avoided if all Ninja were enormous douchebags and had just sat down and talked like actual adults.

Ok before I start reading this I want to know if it has some yaoi bullshit in it because I don't want to feel disappointed and sick if I come to like the story only to find that it's a fantasy of some gay or a gay shipper.

Sorry for my language. I'm tired of yaoi. Last ten stories I read, all were yaoi and none had that mentioned in the beginning. Half way into it and I find Sasuke or Kakashi or some random guy shoving his dick into Naruto's ass.

I'm sick of it.