|Reviews for Swallows on the Beam|
| Guest chapter 21 . 6/13
Your story is so long YET very intresting. This tension between Ling and Lan Fan is driving me crazy I just want to jump into the story and tell them to shuddap and kiss when no one is looking. I hope to see another chapter soon but u seem to have a lot on ur plate which I get. Doesn't mean u don't love us ur just busy cause life :P good luck with everything!
| lollipop-chan chapter 21 . 5/27
GOD. this is so good. i literally kept trying to put it off because i didn't want to have to wait for a new chapter, but it was just too good not to continue. i am obsessed with this story.
| lollipop-chan chapter 17 . 5/26
okay, i still have a couple chapters to catch up on, but this is one of the best stories ive read i stg. the detail and your oc's are so amazing, i am just obsessed with this story. i just had to review asap. i love it!
| rinxxxav chapter 21 . 5/19
I loved Zhang! I find it hilarious that he's the Minister of the right, he sounds like a left-wing to me (Political Science major sorry).
Well I hope things get better soon. And congratulations on your new job, best of luck in Japan! But please do update before you get too busy, I beg you! :3
Thanks for updating, regardless of everything. :)
| rinxxxav chapter 20 . 5/7
Aww Al is the sweetest! :3
I'm sorry about your loss, and forgive the horribly late review.
| MandereLee chapter 21 . 4/30
Yay, an update. Gosh, Ling is so *obvious*, like he's 98% of the reason why Lan Fan gets into trouble. P
| rinxxxav chapter 19 . 4/30
Poor Lan Fan! And poor Ling two girls crying to him in one chapter is something!
That damn empress, I really hope you kill her off bad!
I'm sorry for the late review, life has been happening a lot to me these days. u.u
Thank you for updating.
| HELLO chapter 21 . 4/29
I really do hope you'd stay healthy and well. And, congrats on your promotion! But whatever reason you have, no matter how long you update, I'd still read you story especially SOTB. This is just well-written and just perfect. I mean, your updates are just worth the wait. Those Ling and Lan Fan moments urghghghrg I can't contain my feels anymore. Great job on this chapter, as always. :D
| eanaros chapter 21 . 4/26
Oh man, so good. I especially think there were a lot of good character moments this chapter. The only thing I might say is that I don't know if we need another plot element of significance (i.e. the committee) - there are already a bunch bouncing around.
And of course both my condolences for the sad news, and congratulations for the exciting.
| Crying Ink chapter 21 . 4/25
I'm sorry to hear all of the bad things that have been happening in your life recently, and I'm amazed to see you post a chapter despite all of that. Congrats on your new job, by the way. This chapter was great, and its amazing to see how much work you put into all of your writing despite the obstacles of life. Take as much time as you need to post the next chapter. That being said, I can't wait for the next update because this is literally my favorite fanfic of all time. Of All Time!
| LEGNA chapter 21 . 4/24
Dude your reasons are your reasons and that's enough but
Omg it was so goood?
I'm just happy you updated!
This story should be published omg
Congrats on your positive life updates!
*Spreads good vibes*
Holy shit LAn fan
Omg the dowager
I'm dying because ling Yao
I love this story sososo much I kept checking weekly to since November to see if you had updated and now you did!
Idk man this is just
| loverofmanybooks chapter 21 . 4/24
I'm sorry for your losses. Thank you so much for continuing your story! It's one of my favorites. Congratulations on your job promotion and your new teaching position in Japan. I'm sure you will do fantastic. Please keep writing!
| darkestlight96 chapter 21 . 4/24
This update really made my week.
I hope things take a turn for the best for you.
| MoonlitMelody chapter 21 . 4/24
...damn, you continue to impress me with the length and quality of your chapters. So much intrigue and suspense! This is my favorite FMA fanfic ever, and definitely in my all-time top 5.
I'm sorry to hear about all your struggles these last month, my condolences. But congrats on the promotion and teaching job! I hope your next few months are brighter for both you and your loved ones.
| Guest chapter 21 . 4/24
I'm just happy that you're back! This is one of my favorite fanfictions of all time, and if it takes just as long for the next chapter then I'll wait for that, too.