Reviews for Two Pink Lines
twiila1 chapter 21 . 5/27/2014
I loved this fic so so so much ! Oh my god, you're so talented! It would great if you decided to make one shots about CS parents and their little baby (or maybe a multichapter sequel... :P ) ! Hope your baby is healthy! :D
Guest chapter 15 . 5/21/2014
Erm Henry has Regina's last name not swan since that's his real mom so no matter Emma would have two kids with different last names he's Henry Mills just saying
MrsFell chapter 21 . 5/10/2014
Aw, I love this story so much!
OfBloodandStarlight chapter 21 . 5/8/2014
That was perfect - just- so, so perfect! Thank you so much for this story, I loved it very, very much. All the love and blessings in the world for you and your baby! Congratulations, Xx
G.M.Portraepic chapter 21 . 5/3/2014
This was absolutely beautiful! Gorgeous! Amazing! I loved it so much – you're so talented! I've got the flu, and needed something to get me through bed rest – getting lost in this story has been just what the doctor ordered!

You write with flair, your characterisation is spot-on – it's thoroughly entertaining and rewarding to read.

Also – I can't believe you wrote this when you were pregnant/while you have a new born baby – wow! I have a massive amount of admiration for you. Kudos!

Thank you so much for sharing :)
CaptSwan4ever chapter 21 . 4/30/2014
Bravo! That was so friggin amazing! You are an amazing author! Wow. Just wow.
Guest chapter 21 . 4/19/2014
Two words: bloody brilliant. First of all, every scene was very believable and you definitely have a feel for developing characters and finding the speech patterns of them. Second, if you told me you were the goddamn directer of OUAT I would've believed you. Overall, this fic has been breathtaking to read and if you become an author or summat, I've got to say, lass, that I'd envy your editor. - e
rosetlyre chapter 1 . 4/15/2014
Arguably one of the best fics I have ever read. There was the perfect balance of angst, smut, fluff, and levity, and the characters were written perfectly. BRAVO
TheLovelyThoughts chapter 21 . 4/11/2014
Well I absolutely LOVED this story! You made all the characters very realistic and stayed true to their personalities. I love going into a fanfic and getting that pleasantly surprised feeling that comes with finding a quality story. It took me less than a day to Finish this story in between school because I was so excited about it! Oh and congrats on the baby!
Random chapter 21 . 3/28/2014
I really liked this fic. It was actually one of the best fics I have ever read, not to mention the best Captain Swan one! There were a few mistakes and errors, to do with the show, and also spelling mistakes, but it was definitely worth a read. Thank you for finding the time to write this coz it rocked.
Angels-heart1 chapter 21 . 3/25/2014
Great story! I loved it! Can't wait to read more!
GreentreeFrog chapter 20 . 3/22/2014
Oh I love this story so much- and you kept it so in character, it's great. Your writing is wonderful.
I cackled a bit when I thought about them naming the kid James Nathaniel, because my little brother's name is actually Nathaniel-James. :)
Crimson Eyed Sakura chapter 21 . 3/15/2014
This was totally cute! I loved it. :) You really kept them in character and kept the situations believable. :)
captainhookcaptainfreedom chapter 21 . 3/13/2014
oh my god. That was bloody beautiful. awwww, I loved this fic so much! Why does it have to be over? ): That was so sweet and cute! AWAWAW! I am crying like a baby right now. Would u ever ever ever consider doing some sort follow up? Cause I would love it! 3
Thanks so much for writing this! I might just go back and reread it all over again. (:
KELS B chapter 21 . 3/5/2014
I absolutely loved this story couldn't stop reading! You are an amazing writer I had so many feels through it all! Are you doing a sequel cause I be there to read it!
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