|Reviews for Two Pink Lines|
| Lisa1972 chapter 5 . 3/30/2013
this was good. I like that she finally is getting it through her head that he wants to be there but he doesn't know how...& I know my parents had sex while us kids were in the house...there are 4 of us & we are all roughly 2 years apart ;)
| ChamberlinofMusic chapter 4 . 3/30/2013
Thanks for the update! I'm excited to see Henry's reactions to the pregnancy! :)
| citigirl13 chapter 4 . 3/30/2013
Great work. I love the Emma/Hook interaction. Good job!
| PeaceHeather chapter 4 . 3/30/2013
Cute. And yes, she did hurt his feelings but I can see being too exhausted to notice or care much if she had.
| Kou Shun'u chapter 4 . 3/30/2013
ugh, i hate it when older people talk to children with such insinuations. hook wasnt so bad but he still did it. not much progress in this chapter, only the tv.
| Maddie chapter 4 . 3/29/2013
I am way too addicted to this story, Allie! I've been waiting for you to update :) Even though I feel sorry for Emma in her sick state, I kinda like how this serves as her reminder, that she is indeed pregnant. This baby is a reality that she can't run from anymore...
i find it hard to believe that Emma can go from friends with benefits with Killian to chummy pals/barely tolerating him...you know it's only a matter of time before they revert to their old ways...hehe. Besides she can't get 'more pregnant' right? That's by no means a criticism, i think Emma's just fooling herself...the denial is strong in that one ;) I think you're right, this baby is going to connect them on an emotional level, particularly with ultrasounds and baby wriggles coming their way. I would love them to get a fetal picture and attach a little hook onto one of the baby's hands as a joke, lol. (No denying you're the baby daddy now Killian :) )
I loved how Hook assumed Emma was watching porn, haha. and that he's totally comfortable wandering around half naked ;) I would love to see an emotionally unstable hormonal Emma (like full on mood swings, although her her humor's already pretty biting, people are in for a treat with her pregnancy hormones)..and for Hook to do something totally unexpected, like being busted reading 'What to Expect When You're Expecting' or something. (Maybe there's such a thing as 'The Sassy Girl's Guide to Pregnancy'? Cos that would suit Emma to a tee...he could give it to her as a gift. I know there are some hilarious preggo guides out there).
Because as much as he believes he's not a 'kid person' that little baby isn't gonna care, and he will feel unconditional, reciprocal love for him/her. I adore the fact that Grace & Henry are friends - I just loved that little girl so much and cried major happy tears when Jefferson found her in Storybrooke. It was awesome hearing more about her in your story...and i agree about Hook & Tink, she seems feisty like Emma, and Hook doesn't seem like the type to go without, ahem, 'companionship' for very long ;) Can't wait to read about Henry's reaction!
| Lisa1972 chapter 4 . 3/29/2013
*giggle* Emma should just get it over with & have "the talk" with Killian...it might make her feel better :)
| mali86 chapter 4 . 3/29/2013
Please update again soon! It was great:)
| Nevars-Using-Ma-Acount Againzz chapter 4 . 3/29/2013
HA! I LOVE THIS!
| fire1 chapter 4 . 3/29/2013
Good chapter but why oh why did you cut it in half, that was just plan mean of you. so looking forward to the next one.
Please update soon
and thanks for the good chapter
| celestria06 chapter 4 . 3/29/2013
Yeah update! Love this fic!
| Guest chapter 3 . 3/29/2013
| Maddie chapter 3 . 3/28/2013
Just adding to say that the 'guest' review was mine...forgot to add my name to the top ;) I loved how Snow & Charming assumed the baby was Neal's, and Snow's comforting explanation 'i know what it's like to fall for a taken man...' that cracked me up.
| Guest chapter 3 . 3/27/2013
I love this story so much. Please update soon! Can't wait for the next chapter.
| Ouat-in-vampirediaries chapter 3 . 3/27/2013
i just wanna say that i really love this story for far! i love overprotective charming! i think it would be interesting to have it be twins! lmao imagine hook with twins!