Reviews for Artificial Love
Not logged in chapter 1 . 7/20/2016
Great story! We need to learn a lesson from this
Edhla chapter 1 . 5/3/2013
Hi :) I don't know how closely this adheres to Absolute Boyfriend, since I'm not familiar with it, but I enjoyed reading this. You got your point across well. I did think it was a little too dependent on dialogue (and internal monologue), particularly in the later part, and some of the dialogue/interior monologue seemed a little contrived/there for the point rather than sounding natural. However, enjoyable read. Well done :)