Reviews for Hogsmeade
Marvelgeek42 chapter 1 . 10/31/2016
Oh my god, this was way sweeter than I expected it to be when I read the summary.
I love how you wrote Dennis and I'm glad to see a Colin that thinks about things other than Harry Potter.
I really like Fenella, too (even if I had to double check if I had remembered the name correctly). It's always nice to see people realizing that not all Slytherins are like Malfoy.
I also love how you added the Camera Club and it's location. I never thought about something like this existing within the walls of Hogwarts, but in retrospect that seems really dumb of me.
Another thing I liked was how Ginny and the Ravenclaws joined the Creevey brothers.
FriendofMolly chapter 1 . 9/10/2015
Those two. They're almost as crafty as Fred and George.
Lady Phoenix Fire Rose chapter 1 . 6/29/2014
Ooo, nice. I'm trying remember, but it's not coming to me, and sadly the fifth book is the only one we don't hqve a copy of, but Dinnis was actually at that meeting wasn't he? I know that you like to keep thngs canon, so he must have been... If he was, then it completely slipped by me until I read this, that he was actually too young to be there. Great story, and thanks for pointing out something that I totally missed.
Vicki Turner chapter 1 . 1/13/2014
Love this! I love seeing the beginning of Colin's forgery work!
Beside Moonlight chapter 1 . 8/6/2013
Aww. Cute little Colin and Dennis. I cried when I realized Colin died.
keeptheotherone chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
This is much more satisfying that just saying Jo's bad at math :) I love the early hints of Colin the forger and how the two boys worked together, and most especially Ginny's cooperation. I've always thought she would make a great co-conspirator :) That's brave of Colin to suggest asking McGonagall, as if Filch had done so she probably would have kept both boys out of Hogsmeade.
Lady Elizabeth of the North chapter 1 . 6/6/2013
Very nice! I'd always wondered about how Dennis got into Hogsmeade. I can completely imagine him and Colin figuring something out. Nice job!


bravenclawesome chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
I was recommended by Oriondruid to read your stories, and I was looking through the Dennis/Colin archive. Did you know that you're #1 in reviews if you set the range to less than 5000 words? (I'm #4 on the same archive, by the way.) Great job on that, and great job on this story too. The Fenella girl was an interesting character, though it would have been good to know a little more about her because she left me feeling all intrigued but nothing happened. I don't have any siblings, but I could see the love :) the characters were as in character as they could have been, which could be anything really, since they're so minor. But it was exactly what I imagined they would have said and done, so kudos to you for that.
You're a great writer, and I can see why someone like Oriondruid would find your stories appealing. I hope you take the time to read (and review?) my stories. My personal favourite is Gryffindor At Heart, a four-chapter family/tragedy piece I wrote that has no pairings. Please check it out if you can!
Ralinde chapter 1 . 5/23/2013
Hahaha this was brilliant. Trust Colin and Dennis to come up with a plan like that. I loved the bit about the Camera Club and Fenella thinking it was impossible to make a still photograph. I also like how Ginny and Michael backed them up so Dennis could go to Hogsmeade. The treathening with McGonagall was great, of course Filch would not want to be ridiculised yet again.
Lady Ayami chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
Lol. That would be incredible.
Empress Empoleon chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
Rule breaking, eh? :) I loved the brotherly love throughout the story - Colin's going through all this for Dennis to get into Hogsmeade. And, I like Fenella! Is she your OC?

I found the fact that there is a magical photography club at Hogwarts to be very interesting. Was that in canon? If you came up with it, I'd say it was creative. I mean, we know that Colin is a photographer, but I wouldn't have thought of making a club for it...

This was a satisfying read. Good job!
Montley chapter 1 . 4/27/2013
This was very enjoyable, and I liked the idea of a photography club, and I liked the fact that Colin was friends with a Slytherin, it was a nice touch.
This was a very creative idea, and ingenious of Colin and Dennis!
Great work!
articcat621 chapter 1 . 4/22/2013
That was great! Colin and Dennis are so cute, and I love the way people portray their relationships! Also loved Ginny backing them up! That was lovely! :)
Izzyaro chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
I've always wondered how Dennis got to Hogsmeade so young, and this was an excellent explanation. The interaction between the two was very believable; you could really see how close the two of them were. I liked that you made Fenella a Slytherin; it;s always nice to see Slytherins that aren't pureblood bigots, and I liked the way Colin defended her. Ginny backing them up with Filch was brilliant, I can definitely see her doing that, but Coin was managing very well before that. Great job, well done.
starlight.moon.princess chapter 1 . 4/20/2013
This is brilliant :)

I must admit, i always found it a bit odd that Dennis was there for the meeting even though he was only a second year. I just chalked it up to the fact that by her own admission, JKR is notoriously bad with numbers and must have therefore missed that little fact.

I do think that this is a brilliant explanation however.
And it's just like Colin to use photography to do it.

I do have to say that it seems a bit odd that the concept of a still photo is foreign to wizard. While most of their photos usually move around, I'm sure someone must have taken pictures of inanimate objects where there would be no possibility of movement in the resulting photograph.

Overall, well done :)
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