Reviews for Family Services
kadronya chapter 6 . 4/16
I love it!
Guest chapter 3 . 11/28/2014
I think this is just wrong...edward is wrong...bella is wrong. Im going to stop reading here...in real life he would get into trouble.
Guest chapter 2 . 11/28/2014
Ummmm...he would get fired...especially moving in with her.
ChristyWIX chapter 6 . 11/1/2014
Loved the ending to this. You two have really good ideas and they form so well in the stories. I loved the trip, as I'm a huge Disney fan and travel across the country each December with the hubs for a week. We love it there. His proposal was really sweet and the surprise wedding was awesome. I've truly enjoyed River through this whole fic, she's been delightful. Loved and laughed hard, when she fell asleep and peed on Edward. Tanya working at McD's was funny. Too bad she wasn't in prison too, for elderly abuse. Bitch. I'm glad Bella and Charlie went alone together to Renee . . . they needed that closure, to start healing. I believe it was Savannavansmutsmut that sent me to you two. I read her library a couple months back. Her 'Isle', really was fantastic. You rec'd that here. Thank you both again for another great tale. Christy
ChristyWIX chapter 5 . 11/1/2014
Okay, if I wasn't squicked out enough, you had to throw in child porn too? Goodness women, you're killing my wimpy ass self here. SMH. Poor Bella. I'm elated that James got twenty years and no chance of parole. However, that's not long enough. Renee and Phil each getting thirty, isn't long enough either. Perhaps you can get the bus that's transporting all of them off to their prisons, to flip and they lose limbs and appendages. Grrrr . . . I can't believe the lengths they went through to subject Bella to worse and worse shit. The fact that she came out of it at all . . . let alone okay enough to be as strong and good hearted as she is . . . is a damn miracle. Sick fucks!
ChristyWIX chapter 4 . 11/1/2014
Jasper was very smart in not only suggesting the CCTV, but getting it quickly installed. Poor Bella, Edward and River . . . this is so fucked up. From her little rant, it seems Renee has been cheating other families out of money too? How, I could care less . . . but she is one sock person. So glad that Jessica got back in time that James didn't get to rape Bella. Still managed to beat her up though. I'm so glad all of that is all recorded. I'm thinking that James, the idiot, probably bragged about his past time with Bella. Also, I'm thinking Edward just recorded everything that Renee spewed at him right then. At least I'm hoping he did . . . as they were waiting for this opportunity to have her confess . . . it'd be quite the shame if all those words were for only his ears. Bella's Tera's were not for the reason that Renee is thinking and hoping. They are for how she is really seeing her mother right now. The disgusting vile creature that she is. Not that Bella didn't already know this . . . but, now she just got it thrown in her face again. This story is really kind of sick. Love the love parts of it and Edward's family . . . but the vile things that have happened to Bella before and now, are really hard for me to read . . . I'm too much a wimp.
ChristyWIX chapter 3 . 11/1/2014
Well, I'm not surprised at all that vile ass Renee showed up with both of her puppets. I still think that Charlie should claim statutory rape, and that Bella ran away from home after that happened, so she could get away from it all. James would get prison time as he's too much older than her. Renee could even get time too, for having a hand in it. She was only sixteen and she left her with James when she went away with Phil that weekend. I'm sure you'll make it worse before it gets better, but I have no doubt that BxE and the family will win this. Charlie also still needs to file fraud charges against Renee to get that money back from her. I'll also bet he's even paying child support this whole time . . . only Renee hasn't been using it for Bella, as she hasn't even been home in over a year and a half. What the hell would they want River for anyway . . . most likely to sell her on the black market.
ChristyWIX chapter 2 . 11/1/2014
Poor Bella and River . . . they are the ones going through hell in all of this. Charlie and Bella were both lied to, repeatedly, by Renee. I can't believe he sent her seventeen thousand dollars? What the hell! He needs to go to the police and file charges of fraud against her and get that money back. Loved that Mrs. Cope was on Edward's side and even advised him on how to handle things. I don't think it would be a good idea for Edward to be anywhere near River when Jessica visits. With River calling him dada all the time . . . that could backfire . . . especially if Jessica has any sort of misplaced feelings for Edward. Also, I really hope that Charlie isn't stupid enough to press charges against Edward for overstepping his boundaries. He needs to go take all his anger out on Renee, not BxE.
ChristyWIX chapter 1 . 11/1/2014
When he said Uncle Charlie to himself in the car, when thinking of places . . . I just knew he'd be her father. Bonus, no squick factor either, because Edward and Bella aren't truly related. Tanya is a vile in this. Nice lack of conscience there, Tanya. Turning the power and heat off on a baby and its mother. Not to mention the false allegations to begin with . . . just to get her out of her house. Bitch! Now Bella will get her father back . . . after they settle what each was told about the other. Renee can't force Bella back to her, because she's of legal age. Edward has already said he doesn't care of he loses his job, but that would suck if he did. He's clearly good at it. I hope James doesn't try to steal River away . . . as a way for Renee to screw Bella over even more. Can't she still press charges against him, if he does? Statute of limitations can't be gone yet, River isn't even two. Why is Charlie dealing with Renee now, when she's married to Phil for so very long? Reading on to find out . . .
Fran Masen chapter 6 . 10/6/2014
Hated Renee in this story, she was horrible and a terrible person, because a she never was a mother to Bella.

I missed Charlie finding someone, too, I thought maybe Jessica would be great for him. To bad she married Mike!
Jenn Jean Cullen chapter 6 . 8/22/2014
I loved it ladies :-)
vampiregirl31 chapter 6 . 8/19/2014
i love the story ,
Jenn Jean Cullen chapter 1 . 8/19/2014
Hahaha...I love how's he's panicking when he realizes Charlie is Bella's father. :-)
Guest chapter 6 . 8/3/2014
Poor kid. Can you imagine having half of DNA of some pervert?
shaz308 chapter 6 . 4/30/2014
Thanks for a great story. Good to see everyone get what they deserved.
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