|Reviews for If I fall|
| BlazinSalamander chapter 1 . 6/1/2017
nicee, I loved it! There was one error in the ninth verse you said ypo instead of you but other than that I loved it! :D (i might've missed something because I'm kinda tired so my brain isn't completely awake aha)
| KitsunePrideLeader chapter 1 . 5/18/2014
I love it! Please post the story!
| Hellsig Otoupeim chapter 1 . 4/22/2013
somehow it just fits them... grey and natsu are always having eachother's back even when they are bickering and in an odd way, it just seems logical natsu will catch grey if he falls and grey will catch natsu if he falls. and without even having to ask the other. that's friendship!
nah, i like your song.
| Clueless Painguin chapter 1 . 3/18/2013
Hey there! I'm not sure if I should PM you about this or not, but whatever.
You have 2 basic grammar errors in your summary that you should fix if you can find the time. You used "tale" instead of... have?
It's in this context "...but if people could please *tale* a look and give there opinions..."
Also, you used 'there' instead of 'their'
Other than that, I hope that you upload the story soon!
| theabridgedkuriboh chapter 1 . 3/18/2013
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW that was so beautiful