Reviews for Unrestrained Wants
A-kun chapter 2 . 5/1/2017
There is no escaping to it. Neji can run from it all he want, but the past will always follows him.

Forever and ever...

It's a lonely things, a person's past and memories can be a solitary.

If Neji succumb to this point of view and model his action based on his own past, well then isn't the past itself became a godlike.

He will never escape be able to escape from Hinata. His guilt will become his past and she will become his god.

But after all, he does love her...
A-kun chapter 2 . 3/11/2017
I want the plot to Hinata to force double suicide with Neji!

Better they should die together than him being stolen by another girl!
San chapter 2 . 8/15/2016
"At picked leisure, which shall be shortly, single I’ll resolve you—
Which to you shall seem probable—of every
These happened accidents. Till when, be cheerful
And think of each thing well."

(Tempest by Shakespeare)
SilverMarkings chapter 2 . 5/7/2016
I think I like this ending better...
Little Insecure chapter 2 . 2/9/2016
I really enjoyed this story! This is an A for me! it did hurt to see Neji and Hinata become apart, but it made it much more interesting.
anne chapter 2 . 5/20/2015
very interesting read.
roti bakar chapter 2 . 5/20/2015
you know what will make this a sequel? their kids...

it will be like history repeating itself. will neji have a boy or girl? I think a boy is more likely and hinata would have a girl and a couple more of children!

I guess neji's punishment is really a double edge sword here. its good that he can at last have a normal life and I guess he did regret in a way but he did make his own choice. and I guess out of love, hinata spared him and granted him a second chance in life. but I think for the vampire clan, such betrayal is frown upon and can't blame them because it has always been their way of life so I reckon, neji would have to learn to move on.

if their kids meet each other in the end, I guess it would be another cycle? another tragic love story? perhaps a triangle with itachi's son in the loop. LOL!
aurora0914 chapter 2 . 5/20/2015
(y) what about her ending up with Itachi? *Hint hint nudge nudge*
Lynne D. Mariza chapter 1 . 7/7/2014
Well...I stick with my words, you are one amazing writer!
aurora0914 chapter 1 . 2/23/2014
Where is chapter 2?
He does not deserve Tenten or Hinata. And Tenten should commit suicide, or something.
I prefer this ending. (I actually read the whole thing, but I couldnt review it... sigh)
So update soon! Its good to have an alternate ending, although I dont understand why you made it GaaHina instead of ItaHina.
Sigh. Y'uns.
itanejiluver chapter 1 . 8/5/2013
Wow, angsty! This was very emotional and insightful in to the character's thoughts. Good work!
Tea.Cup.Tempest chapter 1 . 6/3/2013
Read bothe the original and this one and I love them both!
mdtiger chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
Found the story and I love this ending better. The first one was somewhat happy for both with a broken hearted tenten. I hate the infidelity but this was all neji's doing. The fact that Hinata will move forward and be surrounded with people who love her and will appreciate her than throw her second chance away. Now he gets the girl but with a name that is meaningless if he basically fell from a top position to a nobody. He lost more than he gain unless he truly loved ten ten with all his heart. I wanted him to suffer more but I wonder how he'll be few years down the road miserable or living the life he built. The last statement makes me think he loved her and if he still would years later.
Fenris Jin chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
I love the thought the elders had (meaning yours.. praising, yes XD).. the fact that they hated the man who took their heiress away, the man who was actually not the one who she is to be married off to.. Being resentful of the man who couldn't keep her.. Such romantics.. LOL

Aww.. Itachi, why not Itachi? Darn, but then we have Gaara, so who am I to complain? It probably has something to do with keeping Hinata one level above. Unfortunately for Itachi, he's a servant and Gaara's an heir.

Anyway, it would be a yes, yes and a yes.. I can't wait for the GaaHina moment.. but I'm still dubious about having Itachi around when it happens.. But then again, when a man like that already knows what he wants, we can't really say otherwise. I'm still dubious about it though.. XD
LoreleiJubilation chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
I kinda liked this ending better, GaaHina is a fav. Great job! :-D
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