Reviews for The Legend of Spyro: The Forsworn
EeveemonStar chapter 1 . 6/23/2015
nice story,but why did you delete how to train your dragon: hel rising story. It was awesome.
The Bonecrusher Hyena chapter 15 . 4/12/2014
...I'm gonna Say it again: Janus is my freakin' god!
The Bonecrusher Hyena chapter 14 . 4/12/2014
...I...Fucking...Love...JANUS XD


And the maze is interesting...IT HAS DINOSAURS :D
Shade105 chapter 1 . 2/25/2014
Hi there!

I just wanted to say that the first chapter of this fic looks really promising, and I think I will continue to read. The premise is eye-catching and the writing is okay, though I'm sure it will get better as I read the rest of the story.

Good job!
Loneshadow117 chapter 36 . 2/22/2014
By any chance was the beginning of this chapter based off of the Halo Xbox One trailer? That just can't be coincidence how much they resembled eachother. Anyways, do I need to read Native's other stories for the sequel, or is that not necessary?
The Bonecrusher Hyena chapter 3 . 2/22/2014
Persophone is against killing children? Why did She kill So many then?
The Bonecrusher Hyena chapter 27 . 2/22/2014
I realy love Spectra :3
The Bonecrusher Hyena chapter 31 . 2/22/2014
I hate and Pity Persophone now...
The Bonecrusher Hyena chapter 36 . 2/22/2014
This...Has...Been...Without a doubt...ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I EVER READ!
Guest chapter 34 . 2/20/2014
At first I thought I was just reading a another spyro fanfiction but after a while it felt more then that. Words can't describe how amazing this story is. The plot, the humor, the tragedies the characters whether they be good or bad you felt a strong connection too. I'm utterly speechless at how amazing and how connected I felt to this story. By far this has been the best story I have ever read. I hope you make more.
Loneshadow117 chapter 34 . 2/9/2014
You know, I can honestly say that I'm excited for the sequel. You've made it so there are so many possibilities for the next that I actually can't even guess what the next one is about.
Aegis Dragon chapter 34 . 2/8/2014
Okay. I kind of did, kind of didn't see that coming. But I thought she was just going to make him immortal! A god?! That seems like a bit much!
Necron Dragon Lord of D.A chapter 34 . 2/8/2014 could say is a part of happy ending...everyone reunited...memtem wish fulfilled, and enemies defeated.

but I am concerned for one topic...


I feel the older sister of Tula will do something reckless because , she doesn't know the water guardian is alive...and now with persephone finding love she will not bare she have it when she kill her father , I think deep on her she still care for him , I fear the older water dragoness will waste a golden opportunity of peace antagonizing the leader of the forsworm ...:(

Or i could be wrong and she will lost her will and a shell of her former self.

And the dark guardians, I feel R├Ądsla have a hidden agenda for himself...
Arcantos the Storyteller chapter 1 . 1/26/2014
A dramatic and powerful beginning, setting up the scene enough so to give an understanding as to what is happening, but leaving a lot open for further development and questions.

Still... 'When Malefor when'? That was a little jarring.
Loneshadow117 chapter 33 . 1/24/2014
That was a well written conclusion for a battle we've all been waiting for. Even though there is still another chapter or so left, I'm still looking foward to the sequal anyways.
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