Reviews for A Mother's Love
4fireking chapter 1 . 10/7/2013
Good start and Good chapter. I'll pretty much read any Black Lagoon stories. Anyways, do you think maybe you could review one of my stories as well. Just a suggestion. Bye.,,,,
usdbvpwofc0haw48 hnyfcxsa3o5yW chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
This is original and very sad. The prayer at the end is especially haunting when you think about the twins' own "religion."

There are a few typos (including a misused semicolon in the summary, just so you know), but nothing really bad. I hope you meant pounds when you were talking about the children's birth weights -babies that weigh only a few ounces would be dead.

Some of the phrasings are a little unusual (kind of chunky instead of flowing), but I'm guessing that is to give certain things a little more emphasis.

Over all this is a really great concept and a nice writing piece. I enjoyed reading it.
demonicDRAMAqueen chapter 1 . 3/19/2013
Nice and touching. Lovely. Knowing how their life did turn out. Its just too sad. Keep it up.