|Reviews for Demon Mates|
| Miraculous2065 chapter 11 . 8/3
Maybe you should continue with the first chapter with rin in class and Shima or the other classmates get too close. Or have Shura find out and make fun of his for it.
| Guest chapter 11 . 6/19
That was was really good, maybe a part two but what would be interesting would be more to the chapter where Shiemi is a little girl and meets an older Ren then she gets she becomes his mate.
| ShateredDreamsAmongOtherThings chapter 11 . 6/5
I wish there was a continuation of chapters 1 and 11 , they were my favorites ! I adored every chapter !
| eknight07 chapter 1 . 4/5
thank you for your story...
like the take you have of the mating thing. pretty sweet and also it is my ship.
thanks for your story.
| hitsuhina15 chapter 11 . 2/27
You should make a complete story of the last one I would like to see how their relationship would grow even more.
| LionBane chapter 1 . 2/23
| Guest chapter 11 . 2/15
The last one was definately the best.
I loved it so much. It was realistic (as much as you can be with a demon but you know...) in the way she reacted to being sold as a bride. To many stories in general and mangas have the happy go lucky attitude marrying a demon which is just unnatural. Shiemis reaxtion it and how she felt in this was really good and the progression of their relationship was well thought out I think.
I also loved the other stories. They were great!
| Myne0 chapter 11 . 1/19
I had thought about this setting before, a person meeting a strange being. Usually it's about the strange being being shuttered and disliked. Then it's either they meet a person who thinks differently and accepts that strange being from the start, or a person slowly changes their minds and truly accepts the strange being. Of the two, I think immediate-accepting-person is supposed to be refreshing to the audience, but in the long run, to me, are usually kinda boring? With needs-time-person, that time is used perfectly as character development. So as a story telling method, I think that trope wins. I guess what I'm saying is, I liked this chapter.
Hey now that the anime's been revived for the sorely skipped Kyoto arc, maybe you're inspiration will pick up again? XD Your writing was enjoyable (though is in need of some proofreading), so it'd be nice to read more, maybe? ;9
| Myne0 chapter 10 . 1/19
Their mother-daughter relationship... Is I guess underdeveloped. At least, I saw no real need for development. 'Got that syndrome where parents are mostly ignored in manga because the story's about the kids! They seem distant. And the mom... more so expectant? Strict? Idrk.
Kuro is a blessed character haha
| Myne0 chapter 8 . 1/19
Quite a few different AUs within this drabble collection, a little hard to tell if a certain some are connected to others...
Judging by the mentions of "Satan merging Earth/Assaiah and Gehenna", did you only watched the prior to writing these? (While I feel that's probably the end goal of the manga, that whole cherade is technically anime only...)
| Myne0 chapter 7 . 1/19
This one's a little generic... But I still foind it cute .
(previous chapters) Yes I also adore Amaimon.
| Queen Hady chapter 1 . 11/4/2016
Own *-* Shiemi and Rin 3 I love them together.
| AnOtakuAlma chapter 1 . 12/14/2015
| woofyy chapter 11 . 11/27/2015
Nice short stories :) i was hoping you'd have some with rin and shiemi kissing and all lol. Anyways, good luckies with your future stories :)
| Allie Grauman chapter 11 . 9/4/2015
I LOVED your stories!