Reviews for Forgotten Memories
Guest chapter 11 . 2/1/2014

Seriously... This is m quality... Change it
Goldenponyboy chapter 16 . 7/7/2013
Well...not the best ending ever, but I suppose that this was a good place to end it. And you used Crossback's spell, much to my own pleasure, can you split his personalities in half if he turns into the other when he travels? You know what? Never mind. This fic was great and you should keep up the great work.
NullRitter chapter 16 . 7/6/2013
Hmm...what if something happens to Shadow during the memory swap? What if he has his second "Episode"...?

One thing I also want to add; When he got his memories erased, did it temporarily get rid of the voices? I'm going to assume that's the case because if Shadow had the voices, then they would be able to tell him everything...What if he knew the truth the whole time...?
Lankore chapter 15 . 7/5/2013
Hooray! They made it back to Equestria! :D
But now freaking Sally is gonna go all Troll master and make some people/ponies go back to earth and forget everything. No offense Blaze but your sister's kinda a jerk to the max.
Anyway, loved the chapter and can not wait 'till the next one.
Arriva Derchi!
NullRitter chapter 15 . 7/3/2013
Awesome chapter!

Also, have you had any luck with the fanart (The one with all our OCs)?
Flutter Night chapter 15 . 7/3/2013
Yay! We're back. Yes! But I didn't talk much in this chapter. Nor introduce myself to them. Did you forget about me?
Inkweaver22 chapter 14 . 6/29/2013
We FINALLY get a checkup on the Equestrian side of things! I mean, jeez! Hottrot was getting a little impatient. Also, he isn't the kind of pony who would get mad at someone for something that isn't their fault. He's very laid back. So it seems strange seeing him get mad at the guys when the memory loss was an accident. Just throwing that out there.
NullRitter chapter 14 . 6/29/2013

A pegasus with an evil pony/dragon hybrid in his head...

A unicorn who had a sadistic manifestation of dark magic in his mind...

A Royal Guard who brutally assaulted and/or murdered another pony...

A son of Chrysalis and Discord...

A righteous former Royal Guard who was cheated on by his girlfriend...

And an inhumane pegasus scientist who caused the deaths of thousands, saw the secrets of the universe, and has an insidious omnipotent entity stuck in his mind, along with hundreds of other voices...

You know, now that I think about it, our team is pretty damn messed up...
Goldenponyboy chapter 14 . 6/29/2013
Can't wait to read the next one, my friend. These are really getting good. Oh, and is it okay if I just say that was a little close to what I did in "Monsters in the Dark"? You know, where I was sucked into my...story...
Lankore chapter 12 . 6/20/2013
GOOOOOOOOOOODDDDDDDD! deadaccount12 I am SICK of seeing this EVERYWHERE I BUCKING GO! Quit with the posting of this or I can and will find you and show you TRUE terror.
I mean HONESTLY! What is this, number 13!?
I am sorry for any peeps who see this and are annoyed by my response but this has gone on long enough.
The Menace Within chapter 13 . 6/19/2013
Loved the way you wrote this out. And that Scooby Doo reference was hilarious.
Goldenponyboy chapter 13 . 6/13/2013
Hey, I don't care what's right and what's wrong. The story itself is magnificent. I know that I never gave that much thought to Crossback's backstory, so there was nothing to screw up. And...foreshadowing? As in...We'll have to put up with this Night Sky guy? Gee, might as well throw Bag O' Tricks in th- never mind. Good story. CONTINUE!
NullRitter chapter 13 . 6/10/2013
After everyone gets their memories back, Hottrot and Soul Flight should arrive at earth with a bunch of mercenaries or something, and they all have a badass fight until they realize what's actually going on. Just an idea.
Lankore chapter 13 . 6/5/2013
Aw, I feel sorry for poor Slips. Very nice chapter, can't wait 'till the next one, keep up the awesome work!
Arriva Derchi!
Flutter Night chapter 13 . 6/5/2013
That was amazing! Thank you for that. Your the best. Hope I can read more soon. See ya later bro.
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