Reviews for Need to Know
uofmcowgirl chapter 2 . 3/24/2013
Just one question...why would she be falling to the ground? Shot? Too much adrenaline? hmmmm
Thecastlefan101 chapter 2 . 3/24/2013
I'm intrigued to know what's going to happen. There are some mistakes but nothing major that stops the reader from being able to read.
Thecastlefan101 chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
I like this. There are a few grammatical errors though although in my head I understand what you are trying to say. I also recommend you use more proper nouns (unless you kept saying she on purpose) and add more detail. Like was he nervous and how it affected his body when she unbuttoned his shirt. Did it affect her and how? And the woman from the beginning and the one that took off his shirt are they the same person?