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![]() ![]() ![]() This is so good! I'm loving this story! |
![]() ![]() I really love your story and I love how you write :) |
![]() ![]() I'm loving this story already :) definitely not terrible, I really hope you continue this. I'm already sad that Harry's gonna die...anyway great start update soon, yes? |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome beginning for the story! Succorbentis is something you made up right? So, does it only make Harry a Squib or does it kill him? If it does kill him I hope they'll find a treatment! I'm sure the Slytherins'll be the first ones (or only ones) who'll notice that something's wrong with Harry... I like that the Gryffindor-bashing wasn't too extreme as of yet :) I hope this won't be the kind of ff where all of a sudden all Slytherin's are totally nice and the Gryffindors are all a**es, the way you did it up till now was really quite realistic and nice Like I said in the beginning, I really really liked the first chapter! :) (And I haven't seen any typos! :D)You've got talent, I can'T wait for the next chapter! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it so far! Keep it up :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I almost cried. I can't wait for more! What happens next? |
![]() ![]() ![]() So normally I don't read stories where someone has an incurable disease, but I will admit that I'm intrigued. Great first chapter! Can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really loved this, hope to see more in the future. :] |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting beginning. Sounds like a good story. More please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I saw that this is your first story and I saw your profile because I was curious if you had any other writing. And I must honestly say, the way you write sounds like you are a true author and makes it sound like you have been doing this for years. The details and how this is written is remarkable. It has truly caught my interest and it makes me never want to stop reading it. It is easy to follow while also very well written. And the emotion behind it, makes it feel like you are actually there and in the character's head. With this type of writing, you could be an author if you wanted too. I hope you continue to write and I can tell I'm going to love this story. Just remarkable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() dkfjnkd omg everything about this chapter got me really excited for future ones! can't wait for updates now! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow loving this story so far. Keep up the great work. Cant wait to read more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh wow poor harry i feel for him sooo much i hope that the sltherins will be ther efor him |