For the sadness of Chapter 5
Malfoy He is fucking clever GENIUS!
he had planned every single step
flicking Harry hand to prove his assumption even I didn’t understand at the beginning

I feel tension between Harry and Draco
They are chasing each other since day one
but I can’t find the real loathed from them
Like the scene in library when they are face Harry didn’t want to attack Malfoy as Malfoy didn’t want to made Harry sad.

I thought it’s right to take her credit away.
Sometimes people didn’t admit the roots of problems which it’s come from them
pretending they didn’t know what happened

however I love his Draco pet The Eager
The sentence is LOL

‘He saw it bombard its owner with letters and sweets for years.’

Please tell me the reason that why the one remembers the rival’s pet
Iconic sentence ‘ your bed or mine’
It’s made me can’t stop smiling.
Thanks

After I concentrate to read
This chapter begin with Draco point of view I really like it He is perfect. He is always great I love him so much
As soon as I read the paragraph that Malfoy thought’ why he feel like he is the cruelest’
I wanna shouted that BECAUSE YOU LOVE HIM BOYYY YOU LOVE HARRY POTTER

However
I found I feel sad about Harry
Everyone expected him to be like they want and don’t care whatever he need or he desired
never listen his describes
Only care about what they thought Harry Potter would like this do this choose this
Decided everything for him
Forget that Harry is just a boy and this is his life

On the other hand why always Malfoy
Why Malfoy had in the Hospital wings same time? Did he follow Harry everywhere since beginning
moreover I predict that Draco had training to be a healer
I really prefer when Harry and Draco had fights each other It’s suitable. LOL
And sure Harry I thought Draco can legilimency too.
He’s so fucking cleaver
ps.I didn’t like G and thanks god that she didn’t get along with Harry XD

Honestly In this chap I feel annoyed with Ron and Hermionie
It's true that I am a reader who know everything but can not stop me piss off them
By the way I don't get the scene that Draco holds up his index finger and gestured a circle around it a couple times.
What does that mean?

However I love the scene that Harry put the slug on the Parkinson' table
Nailed it

yes i reread again
try to catch up something that may misunderstand or didn’t get it

beginning with Promfrey
know from her point of view that Even Professor don’t like The Slytherin

Nevertheless I understand Harry
I used to in similar situations that didn’t know how to tell anyone because of something depend on various factor
and yes it’s true

‘sometimes, you need to struggle through something alone’

since I read Harry Potter The Soccer’s stone till The Deathly Hollow The day that Harry didn’t get gossiping or whispering are not exist
poor boy

back I quietly like the Harry thought about Slytherin If Hogwarts is his home It’s could be their too.
Everything has changed except Malfoy
Yeah it’s made me feel like Harry
My lips twitching
Okay I am mad too Harry

Harry is so adorable I like him so much
And this story made Harry is Harry
His thought his behavior his mind it’s belongs to Harry Potter
not out of characters
and I want to let you all know I try so hard to find This Harry from other fan fiction but not found
In the end of this chapter made me feels down Hogwarts is his home bot no one stand by him

Is leaving this story like this the intentional ending? like surprise, terminal illness means you don't get an ending? It'd be both genius and rude ngl...

Because otherwise I'm starting to worry you died yourself... guess there still isn't a new update, there's always next year...

Blaize ZABINI!
NO M IN SIGHT!

so much love this story

Hope you well and updates soon

I’m cry about how much they love each other
Love can save Harry again

I’m reread again and I found it
many puzzles that unsolved
why Dreco in the vault after the war or who are Mulfoy expect
it good if you come back to update this story
I’m still waiting and always

Why are you leaving us like this
I really miss my boys
It’s almost 5 year since last update
3 year since you didn’t move

maybe you think no one waiting but me
and I know many people still waiting for your update
please please it’s good time

Crying again for this chapter
‘..where I fit in there’ it’s made my eyes have watering
sad but true please harry your love is helping you
love is powerful

hello, this was my fav fic when i was in secondary school but at some point i stopped reading fic altogether and stopped keeping up with updates. for some reason it popped back into my memory out of the blue and i came back to reread it.

it’s been awhile since you’ve updated so i’m not sure when or if you will see this, but i feel the need to say smt bc this fic is so near and dear to my heart.

reading it is incredibly emotional and i can’t help but wonder how much of this is personal experience. it really changed the way i think about and understand terminal illness - which feels silly to say about a hp slash fanfic but it’s true! i cant decide whether harry living or dying would be the more resonant ending because he has been so profoundly out of control of his body (and emotions and choices) that having draco decide that he must lose his magic in order to live - so he has no control over his life! - - strangely also feels tragic. but obviously dying isn’t fun either. but also harry’s always been a profoundly unreliable narrator.

i just imagine that knowing that i will die and knowing that the world will go on without me would probably make me want to explode just so i can leave a mark on it. i cant imagine trying to soothe that anger so i wouldn’t explode so i can be normal and live normal.

harry’s always had it so rough it’s very heartbreaking

i just wanted to say you wrote something very beautiful and i’ve always been fond of an ambiguous ending so i like thinking about where these characters will go. if you update i will eagerly read but if not they will continue to live in my brain as i puzzle together a lil head canon for myself :)

thank you for writing this and i wish you the best!

I listen a beautiful song then I just realized the lyrics make me feel thoughtful about The List
That song name ‘Die for you’ by the weeknd
I want to share whoever read this story please you should listen the song
And again Hope you still alright and update soon