For real this is the funniest thing I have ever read. My friends and I used it for a drinking game over the weekend (If You Laugh You Drink) and got absolutely slathered. Thank you for keeping this fic alive, it brought me and my friends so much joy

this whole story is just a 16-year-old getting SA'd over and over again. it's not even funny like My Immortal most of the time (except for the spelling/grammatical errors which are always hilarious), it's just gross and weird

Lol My immortal rip off. Not cool dude.

I am a prep posr who has 0 poosay to be fked #floppop

My pussy popped in a perfect combo, 0 stops, 0 misses, all great

It's funny that you can tell who's read My Immortal just by reading the comments.

Also, what an absolute masterpiece.

Atlantiana Rebekah Loren, Enoby- I mean TaTa- I mean Tara- I mean Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Ravenway, and Twila Beautiful Psycho Topaz Cullen are icons and I love them so much.

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ty for reposting the story. keep history alie

It's a pity the original has been deleted

For those of you who are too dumb to read the intro this is a reposting of a deleted story. The author is not the original author.

Thanks for documenting history my friend.

This was incredible. The poetic words were painted as if the story itself was Mona Lisa’s delicate face. Like fine wine, this beautiful piece of literature has simply grown in majesty with age. I truly do not believe there could be any sort of legitimate critique, as it has reached utter and complete perfection. Although I wish there was more to bathe myself in this masterpiece more thoroughly, I understand that its perfection cannot be matched in this current state and therefore should never be changed. Thank you, PercyPwnsGaea, for putting this together so I can feast my eyes on this intricately woven epic tale whenever my heart desires, which is constantly. Thank you, and goodnight.

REAL MARY SUE

Um... Nani..?

the second I found out about this, the first thing I checked is not the story itself, but the review section lol, I can see difference in comments between purer writer and those who already read "My Immortal" and it's just hilarious

Aroosed? O-kay. If you want this to be taken seriously get a better editor. Your current one is missing a lot of crucial errors - grammar and spelling. It'll make your fic so much more authentic. Your use of thou - as in Early Modern English alternative to you and your - is a bit overdone and cringe. When using "thou" it's usually interchanged with you, e.g. "Fie upon thee! You, cousin, test my patience." The verb conjugation used after thou is art, as in "Thou art..." meaning You are, not "Thou is...". Thee is usually used at the end of a sentence, not the start, and overall don't overuse the articles, it just looks stupid. I like the addition, though, it makes Edward much more old-fashioned and a little outspoken. Also, although it's really cool how you've set the story in the current time of Bella and Edward being together, it's really intense that he instantly wants Atlantiana (AWESOME name!) despite that.