|Reviews for Birth By Fire|
| all forms of fluff chapter 7 . 2/20
Bazette's battle enhancements under Cu Chulinn's runic magic was indeed inspired. If I am not confusing legend with fanfiction then the man in life was a bit of a magus dealing with gaigas and such so he had the capasisity to be summoned as caster. The red saber, whom I only know of becasue of a previous fanfiction where shirou summoned the four different sabers from the Fate series, is turning out to be impresive. I am a bit disapointed as this story isn't verry far along, It seems I miss calulated in this being the first of the two dealing with this Shirou. I belive this came about as a way to explain some back story in a soul of fire. Either way The Saber that Shirou summoned is going to be perfect for him to team up with as she is basicly able to copy, or learn, from enimies much like Emiya Shirou could though their weapons. So they complament eachother verry well and I cant wait to begin Soul of Fire next. I am interested in who your going to get as assisan. I would sugest taking a page our of From Fake Dreams only have the Blonde magus summon him. That story really laid the ground work for her fan girl of the origal magus killer and the slots of the masters are rappidly filling up. I could toatly see her using one of his origan bullets to summon him. After all he was the prim boogy man for maguse as she was growing up.
Now that that pathic fanboy pitch on how to write your story is over I would just like to say that I have had a blast on these seven chapters. This shirou seems like he would be interesting to read about. So I am off to read A Soul of Fire. Thank you for the story.
| Giratina Zero chapter 7 . 2/16
Man...keep this up...the fun...it's awesome
| Biblio388 chapter 7 . 2/9
Excellent bit of mayhem. Always fun to read something like this. Hope to see more in the future.
| Biblio388 chapter 1 . 2/9
Really like the idea of this story. Anything that involves fire can't be all bad. Looking forward to reading more. Think I will give ASOF a look as well.
| harlequin320 chapter 7 . 2/9
damn ... I can't wait to see more of this Grail War, between Nero as Saber, Cu Chulainn as Caster, Heracles as Archer, Shirou as Avenger, and the various hints you have included in Soul of Fire, I'm definitely looking forward to where you will take this, keep up the good work, update soon
| tymofey chapter 5 . 2/2
At this point I have an impression that this is going to be Shirou and harem against that dude Bazett is chasing and shit-ton of servants he is going to summon. Assuming I guessed right, nice setup, don't think its ever been done.
| Guest chapter 7 . 1/29
I like the change up of classes. It is making things interesting. Also, battle crazy shirou is fun.
| The Man chapter 7 . 1/25
Ah. The long awaited chapter. It was good. I can't wait for the next.
| Arrixam chapter 7 . 1/24
You know, I had something to say about this chapter yet I can't seem to remember. That's what I get reading it section by section for the past week or so. I am sorry it took me so long though.
Good ol' Alcaeus as Archer? Tell me how that is fair. Tell me! But as you say you have even more OP Servants you have my interest.
Oh I remember something to say. Your fight scenes are much more animated and much easier to follow. Not your strong suit- ha! You're pretty good at it.
I look forward to more. And will get back to you if I remember what was on my mind...
| only a fan chapter 7 . 1/19
| Faraway-R chapter 7 . 1/18
This war is indeed going to be fucking awesome! :D
Herakles as Archer. Cu Chullain as Caster... I am going to go out on a limb and say that other Servants are also going to be shuffled around.
| Guest chapter 7 . 1/17
True terror indeed. Nice to see Bazzette and Cú Chulainn eing badass in tandem.
| Yikari chapter 7 . 1/17
Thank you for the update!
I'd say this was pretty nice. While Shirou that is shown in the other story is noticeably... healthier, I kinda find I like this one no less. I mean, this dude right here is the one who managed to inspire the proper awe of the Laser Eyes into someone like Rin. And his possible interactions with EMIYA (I assume that was the dude that got summoned instead of the pacifistic saint Kirei predicted?) are rife with potential too.
Only real nitpick I can name is how Ilya's meeting with the 'Administrator' happened off-screen.
| Twigon Halolover chapter 7 . 1/16
I'm interested in seeing who becomes berserker, or if his is the class that's replaced by Avenger.
The Assasin summoned by original caster would be the literal worst candidate for Berserker, given his reality breaking technique is based upon a perfectly calm mind. Original Caster would be interesting, but probably easy to defeat once someone got over the surprise of Berserker being a Mage. Her mind was her best asset, and without that she's screwed.
I guess I'll just have to wait and see.
| Twigon Halolover chapter 4 . 1/16
Eyes like fire, connected to the church, white hair, masked, laughs when he sees Rin?
Yeah, it's still Shirou.
Either that or you pull a 'fuck you and your presumptions, audience' and make it a Sakura who went crazy trying to honor the death of her love, Shirou. but that's not very likely.