|Reviews for Birth By Fire|
| Thunder Dragon chapter 13 . 1/25
I have a challenge for you if you are interested. Now this is a unique idea that has never been done before and holds a premise that I think is unique and also holds something dear to a lot of peoples hearts my self included and it should be done. It is a Spyro the Dragon and Sailor Moon crossover. You think your up to it? Because it is a change of pace rom what your used to.
The Dragon of the Stars and the Princess of the Moon. The Spyro side of the crossover Part 1: Spyro's Silver Millennium origins and Spyro's current life and appearance. Spyro in his current life has to resemble his Classic Counter part version in the Classic Spyro games in terms of appearance and personality A Heroes' Tail for Spyro's appearance and Spyro's personality in Spyro: Year of the Dragon but must eventually grow and matures into a character that is in terms of personality and looks a mixture of his Legend of Spyro persona and his Classic Counterpart in terms of personality but not in that order of growth. Spyro's previous life's backstory during The Silver Millennium however has to be the one from The Legend of Spyro Series.
The Dragon of the Stars and the Princess of the Moon. The Spyro side of the cross over part 2: Spyro's powers. Spyro has to have all the powers he has in the Legend of Spyro Trilogy and The entire Classic Spyro series including the various weapons and equipment Spyro can use from both the Classic and Legend of Spyro series and all the powers that Spyro has in Skylanders including the various forms Spyro has in that series. Spyro also has to keep all the abilities he obtained throughout the various adventures and master them and without being corrupted. Spyro can also gain new abilities from the Sailor Moon side of the crossover and the same can apply with his allies but no sailor suits for the Spyro cast!
The Dragon of the Stars and the Princess of the Moon. The Spyro side of the crossover part 3: Story Arc's on the Spyro Side. The Story arcs on the Spyro side of the crossover have to be based on the Legend of Spyro Trilogy and it should also have story arcs centered around these Classic Spyro games with some originality:
Classic Game Number 1. The original Spyro the Dragon.
Classic Game Number 2. Spyro 2: Ripto's Rage.
Classic Game Number 3. Spyro: Year of the Dragon.
Classic Game Number 4. Spyro: A Hero's Tail(No fourth wall breaking on this part or any part of the story period).
Classic Game Number 5. Spyro: Shadow Legacy.
The Dragon of the Stars and the Princess of the Moon. Spyro Side Part 4: The Dragons and other supporting characters. The Dragons for the Spyro side of the crossover have to be a mixture of both the Dragons of The Legend of Spyro series and the Classic Spyro series in back story and design in a way that makes sense such as the dragons from the classic series are related to the dragons from The Legend of Spyro Series. Such as the classic Spyro series dragons the left the Original Dragon World at the end of Dawn of The Dragon to explore new horizons and did their own thing which is why the classic series dragons have portals that lead to different worlds and over time they eventually devised their own culture. For Spyro's posse it has to be all Spyro classic as his comrades in arms with The Dragon Guardian's spirits aiding Spyro in mastering his powers from the Legend of Spyro series and with the Dragon Elders from the classic series training Spyro to master his classic powers and the powers that Spyro has from the Skylanders series. Cynder also has to appear and act as Spyro's love interest and have the powers that she has in Skylanders and The Legend of Spyro Trilogy. Now the Spyro crew can gain new powers and abilities from the Sailor Moon side of the crossover or in the case of Sparx the Dragonfly gain powers from all across the Spyro franchise.
The Dragon of the Stars and the Princess of the Moon. The Spyro side of the Crossover part 5. Parings for the Spyro cast. Spyro has to hookup with Cynder(obviously). Hunter get's with Bianca like in classic cannon, Bentley the Yeti can get with Elora the Faun, and Agent Nine can get with Sheila the Kangaroo.
The Dragon of the Stars and the Princess of the Moon. The Sailor Moon side of the crossover. Sailor Moon Side of the crossover Part 1: The Senshi's and supporting cast. The cast for the Sailor Moon side of the crossover should be a mixture of both the Manga and the original Anime with all the celestial soldiers appearing along with their cannon civilian identities and appearance so no Spyro Senshi! Also the Senshi's non combative supporting cast is cannon as well.
The Dragon of the Stars and the Princess of the Moon. The Sailor Moon side part 2: The Senshi's power's. The Senshi's powers have to be a mixture of both the Anime and Manga with some originality like the Senshi's learning new abilities after meeting Spyro and interacting with his friends or going to the worlds that Spyro has traveled to.
The Dragon of the Stars and the Princess of the Moon. The Sailor Moon side part 3: Story Arcs. The Story arcs for the Sailor Moon side should revolve around The Original Anime and it's all it's seasons and their plots and storylines or you can go with the new anime reboot of Sailor Moon Crystal. But if you go with the original anime you have to with the original five seasons but without the filler(except for the one with An and El). Now These seasons are:
Season 1. Sailor Moon.
Season 2. Sailor Moon R.
Season 3. Sailor Moon S.
Season 4. Sailor Moon Super S.
Season 5. Sailor Moon Stars.
The Dragon of the Stars and the Princess of the Moon. Sailor Moon side part 4: The Sailor Scouts parings. Serena and Darien have to be together as their relationship is just to perfect. Now for the Outer Scouts. In the Manga we have seen that the Inner Scouts in their previous lives were in love Endymion's four generals and after they are defeated their souls are incased in stone's that they are canonically named after in the manga. So for this crossover let's free them and give the Outer Scout ladies their men so they can get some good loving.
| Guest chapter 13 . 12/24/2016
Awesome. Just awesome. Though Ruler , that is to say Shirou Tokisada Amekusa is heavily OC. Still I really like the story and the prank man, the prank. Just awesome.
| JJplayz chapter 10 . 12/18/2016
Avenger is Shirou isn't he? Similar to how Archer is Shirou to in canon? That one line when Rin said his stance looked familiar gave it away.
| Battlesny chapter 7 . 12/9/2016
ok, nerfing Gae-bolg so it doesn't have its secondary attack instead of getting rid of the spear does make sense when I realize that even with all of his runes and geasses and whatnot Cu Chulainn is still more a warrior than a mage.
yeah as a warrior who uses spells in conjunction with his fighting style, spells like self-enchantment and battlefield control are definitely a basic.
also, yay non-berserker Heracles!
| Battlesny chapter 6 . 12/9/2016
if Cu Chulainn is a caster in this story, then why is he armed as a lancer? when summoned as caster he isn't supposed to have Gae Bolg or metal armor.
| Battlesny chapter 4 . 12/9/2016
here's hoping that even in this universe Rin somehow manages to summon Shirou as her servant.
| Battlesny chapter 3 . 12/9/2016
we're supposed to hate Shinji in this fix? you say that like there are stories out there where shinji isn't some sort of rapist jackass.
| Cilo chapter 11 . 11/18/2016
The concept of the Wild Hunt is common throughout Europe, but it can be said to have its origins in either Viking lore (Odin's Hunt or Ride of Asgard) or pagan Germanic myth. It was first documented by Grimm (of the fairy tales) in the 1800s. Does that even count as a legend? I mean, if you try to summon with multiple catalysts, wouldn't the Heaven's Feel Ritual just use the one most attuned to you? How would you even go about embodying the idea of the Hunt? It would be far more likely that you'd get one individual rather than a composite.
Or rather, I don't think a composite spirit is even possible in the first place. Keep in mind what the Throne of Heroes is. Sure, a Legend can earn a seat on the Throne without ever having existed (as the original Assassin), but each of those leaders of the Hunt all did exist. You'd have to combine multiple legends about the fey, ghosts, gods, barbarians, and elves along with some major figures from Cain (Bible) to Odin. This Jagdmeister would manifest the traits of a biblical villain (arguably the first villain since Genesis), the King of Gods, Herod (the persecutor of Christ), Satan, among others and that isn't possible given that each of them are actual entities within the Throne.
I get the whole idea of inserting an OC, but the OC would be impossible given the mechanics of the ritual. There have been four different Grail Wars by this point. There was even a case where twin Masters summoned two Sabers that were representative of different aspects of their singular Legend. Wouldn't a loophole like this have been found out by now?
| Kamencolin chapter 13 . 11/15/2016
Keep up the good work
| Dragonjek chapter 1 . 11/4/2016
"Are you alr- Holy Crap you have no pupils!"
That's the best response to the "Empty Eyes of Unhappiness" that I've ever seen!
| Crafted Reality chapter 2 . 11/3/2016
Damn. I tried burning Porno magazine since I read this... Needless to say... My house was almost burnt down...
| Jack vile Ripper chapter 8 . 11/3/2016
Is Assassin's real identity is Semiramis, the Queen Asyria? And is Luvia's Servant real identity is Saint George, The Martyr?
| Lord Foul chapter 13 . 11/2/2016
you made a typo
They are awed
She is awed
She are awed
Also trolling people with avenger wasn't funny
| draco7347 chapter 13 . 10/24/2016
really love this story cant wait for new chapters
| IX Lives chapter 12 . 10/15/2016
.God. I laughed my fucking ass off so hard! Avenger you are such a fucking troll