Reviews for Birth By Fire
Cilo chapter 11 . 11/18
The concept of the Wild Hunt is common throughout Europe, but it can be said to have its origins in either Viking lore (Odin's Hunt or Ride of Asgard) or pagan Germanic myth. It was first documented by Grimm (of the fairy tales) in the 1800s. Does that even count as a legend? I mean, if you try to summon with multiple catalysts, wouldn't the Heaven's Feel Ritual just use the one most attuned to you? How would you even go about embodying the idea of the Hunt? It would be far more likely that you'd get one individual rather than a composite.
Or rather, I don't think a composite spirit is even possible in the first place. Keep in mind what the Throne of Heroes is. Sure, a Legend can earn a seat on the Throne without ever having existed (as the original Assassin), but each of those leaders of the Hunt all did exist. You'd have to combine multiple legends about the fey, ghosts, gods, barbarians, and elves along with some major figures from Cain (Bible) to Odin. This Jagdmeister would manifest the traits of a biblical villain (arguably the first villain since Genesis), the King of Gods, Herod (the persecutor of Christ), Satan, among others and that isn't possible given that each of them are actual entities within the Throne.
I get the whole idea of inserting an OC, but the OC would be impossible given the mechanics of the ritual. There have been four different Grail Wars by this point. There was even a case where twin Masters summoned two Sabers that were representative of different aspects of their singular Legend. Wouldn't a loophole like this have been found out by now?
Kamencolin chapter 13 . 11/15
Keep up the good work
Dragonjek chapter 1 . 11/4
"Are you alr- Holy Crap you have no pupils!"


That's the best response to the "Empty Eyes of Unhappiness" that I've ever seen!
Crafted Reality chapter 2 . 11/3
Damn. I tried burning Porno magazine since I read this... Needless to say... My house was almost burnt down...
Jack vile Ripper chapter 8 . 11/3
Is Assassin's real identity is Semiramis, the Queen Asyria? And is Luvia's Servant real identity is Saint George, The Martyr?
Lord Foul chapter 13 . 11/2
you made a typo

They are awed
She is awed
She are awed

Also trolling people with avenger wasn't funny
draco7347 chapter 13 . 10/24
really love this story cant wait for new chapters
IX Lives chapter 12 . 10/15
.God. I laughed my fucking ass off so hard! Avenger you are such a fucking troll
Parks98 chapter 13 . 10/13
GOSH FUCKING DAMN IT! Why!? Why did you have to have one of the coolest servants ever have to fight the most overpowered one who killed HERCALES easily!?
Parks98 chapter 12 . 10/13
heheehheahahahaha oh god Gilgamesh just became Vegeta! Also holy crap Heracles is even more of a badass
Parks98 chapter 11 . 10/13
As a fan of the dresden files I know just how terrifying the Erkling can be. So shit be very real
Parks98 chapter 10 . 10/13
oh fuck biscuits why is it every servant Rin ever summons is a fucked up (but badass) future Shirou?
Parks98 chapter 9 . 10/13
MY BOY SAINT GEORGE! Praise be sung to the guy who killed not one dragon in his legends but multiple ones! Also grade A battle continuation so we know that this is gonna be sick
Parks98 chapter 7 . 10/13
Yeah everyones now fucked. To put it simply Heracles was said to specialize with the bow plus lets not forget that he could actually use some NP from his 12 labors
Parks98 chapter 6 . 10/13
hehe its funny that a pyro Shirou has to deal with a caster version of Cu chulainn since he is amazing with fire
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