Reviews for Jump
Leona Esperanza chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
This was adorable! I hope someday you have Tom tell that story...
zebrasdancing chapter 1 . 7/5/2009
love it
Bookworm4194 chapter 1 . 8/9/2008
i like the story but why are tom and carl gay? i've heard of guys just living together
Amethyst-Violet chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
Aw that is so cute

I love it

The awkwardness and ...bickering makes it all seem so much more real... I really really liked it

And the whole thing about jumping off the curb was a really good idea

I wish it wasn't a one shot... but was like a really long story and showed home they got their relationship going and how they told their parents and all that good stuff. Plus since you are such a good writer a story would have been great

But its a great ending... I like it
Destiny's Creator chapter 1 . 3/18/2006
This has to be my all time favorite Young Wizards story. I've been reading it since like forever, I saved it on my computer and whenever I need to smile, I reread. It always works. I've read your other reviews but so far nobody's quite said enough to exactly how brilliant this is. I literally don't have any qualms with anything here. It's absolutely perfect. The Kit and Nita is wonderful and fits their characters /and/ their ages. The Tom and Carl aspect would be a wonderful way to introduce some of the younger readers out there to homosexuality and how it really is just part of the normal life.

"Tom and Carl were still Tom and Carl, nothing had changed, and there they were, living proof that wizards could fall in love and live together and not fall apart or hate each other or go out in a blaze of glory. They could just live."


Please continue to write more, forever and always. I'm dying to see you're take on how Tom and Carl first got together and how they dealt with the wizardry while facing the "regular" obstacles that come with being a gay couple.
Medalia chapter 1 . 1/10/2006
Great story! I hope to read more by you soon!
BookwormRose chapter 1 . 10/29/2005
that was sweet...i really enjoyed it!
PinkPantherLady chapter 1 . 8/28/2005
It's so sweet! And fluffy and wonderful and perfect! I love the dialouge between the two of them. It's not overly 'adult' for 15-16 year olds. The only thing that bugged me was Nita's mother still being alive...

But I suppose that works since you needed to separate them afterwards to introduce the Tom/Carl stuff, huh? Anyway, great job! I'm a sap for this stuff.
Astarael00 chapter 1 . 8/2/2005
*grins* That was great. I especially liked the humor you added; it fit in quite well.
Sakiina chapter 1 . 6/12/2005
Aww, it's so cute! D And the T/C is perfect - understated, always there, Kit's fault for not seeing it earlier - the ignorance of the narrator leading the readers, just as with T/C in Duane... Enjoyable.
Reading Redhead chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
Wow. I've seen this story several times while scanning through the YW romance fics, but somehow I've never read it before, opting to read something else instead. Now, I'm mentally hitting myself over the head at being so stupid. You've done a marvelous job or portraying a moment of change - that moment when two characters stop being "just friends" and decide to move on to something bigger. And you've done it all while keeping everyone perfectly in character. This is definitely going on my favorites, and I'll be looking forward to any other writing you decide to post in the future.

the mouse that roared chapter 1 . 3/11/2005
"/I know they say you don’t love properly till you’re grown up,/ he thought, /but it seems like if you can love somebody through puberty, you’ve gotten the hardest parts out of the way./"

Good thought there...

And that paragraph with Kit and Nita's second kiss... amazing.

I think they came onto each other a little fast though. I mean, where was the meaningful conversation? Aren't they worried at all? First they're shy with each other, then a couple hours later they're kissing nonstop? Just something to think about. This fic has some good things in it... keep it up...
anonymus chapter 1 . 3/1/2005
Normally I don't like fluff but, well, I think it was really good.
Darkest0Angel07 chapter 1 . 8/21/2004
Aw That was so sweet And cute. Very good, it was well written Good job

Uniasus chapter 1 . 7/30/2004
aww, cute!
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