Reviews for This One's on Me
Lady of the Shards chapter 1 . 6/8/2013
Love it! It's so Neal!
JasperRiley chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
Haha, Neal could get anyone to believe just about anything! This was awesome. Hope you do more.
Lena7142 chapter 1 . 3/21/2013
Oh, I love this! The characters are great and I can completely believe it went down this way. :)
calis-1st chapter 1 . 3/21/2013
Delightful! I love his story to the bartender, and Peter's reaction to the delivery.
Leonore09 chapter 1 . 3/21/2013
Nice little vignette. In character and amusing.
maysecret chapter 1 . 3/21/2013
Too lazy to log in.

I love this! It's so... In character #1. But lively and fun! Good job! No huge grammatical errors that yank you out of the rhythm of the story. And flows beautifully!