Reviews for Naruto in Whirlpool
colebryant246 chapter 1 . 4/2
Are Aiko and Hanako guys or girls cuz it was really confusing to read as you described them. You made them seem like transgenders as you referred to them like you were questioning their genders. The power company is estupido (that's whatever language that is for the word stupid).
Guest chapter 11 . 3/28
I wish you had continued this story.
Guest chapter 4 . 1/8
Where is Shino?
Guest chapter 6 . 8/28/2017
PLEASE DO NOT EVER SAY WATER STYLE ITS EXTREMELY CRINGEY
Guest chapter 1 . 2/28/2017
Hey. I heard you're the one who cleans all the toilets at your home, with your tongue.
Soccerlover17 chapter 11 . 1/23/2017
Update please!
TokusatsuLuv chapter 11 . 1/4/2017
I see but this is truly very interesting to read; please update soon
Guest chapter 2 . 6/4/2016
One you got to give them better name seven deadly how about the names better yet how are named loyalty strength courage nobility and integrity respect though the names you could use for the five samurais much better choices because it sounds cool it doesn't make it necessarily cool a name remember that
NatsuxWendy chapter 11 . 5/25/2016
Can u please put out the next chapter
Leonard chapter 11 . 1/7/2016
This is a fanfic you let use a lot of real-life terms and not fictitious so I can kind of can call the fanfic if that's the case defeat the purpose used real words have to make up words if you want to be a fictitious see that argument has no leg to stand on just say I made a mistake screwed up sorry that's all you need to do thank you
nickhassim chapter 7 . 11/29/2015
American Dragon Jake Long
Guest chapter 1 . 10/18/2015
Idk if u know this but I'm pretty sure that brother is nii-San, but I could be wrong
BangtanExo95 chapter 11 . 3/5/2015
keep going, keep going, what happened to kakashi?
michumichu79 chapter 11 . 1/30/2015
BUENO ENCUENTRO TU FIC INTERESANTE PERO LEO QUE YA VAN VARIOS MESES QUE NO ACTUALIZA POR FAVOR DECIR SI LO VAS A CONTINUAL DEVERIAS DE LLEVAR A ITACHI A WHIRLPOOL PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I LOVE NARUHINA ,GAAHINA AND ITAHINA!
narmulti chapter 11 . 12/16/2014
UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON
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