Reviews for Legend of the Kōjin no Kōtei
mxdgray chapter 5 . 11/6/2013
is that obake shithole a decendent of Aizen or something?
Zatarra12345 chapter 7 . 10/8/2013
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uscias chapter 7 . 10/6/2013
Please update.
douglas.bailey.7946 chapter 7 . 9/27/2013
Just found this story and loving it:). Thx for the fluff before
Grimskull chapter 7 . 9/10/2013
I know that as a fan I have no right to do this but... for the sake of my little brain and knowing I act before think I will anyway.

I'm asking for a request and you and the other guy/gal may hate me after this but that would be ok.

Ever read the monkey's feathers by Code Hedira? I think the idea is brilliant even with Goku being a hell lot weaker and I enjoy so very much the concept and the plot its developing... but I'm a bit picky, so...

I greatly respect every writer on this site but the guy makes so many mistakes and some chaps are so short it's starting to get on my nerves. I also think that you are a great writer and I'd like to see what you can do with the idea.

Please, give a few minutes to read this and maybe another minutes to consider it. If you refuse I'll respect that, and if by some miracle you actually consider it you'll make a fan (and maybe several other) very happy
neilwalker09 chapter 7 . 9/10/2013
gud chapter like to see more
l1s44p chapter 7 . 9/5/2013
i like it :) thx for the update
Akula1986 chapter 7 . 8/30/2013
that was the best story I've ever read.
and I think I know who the man with the red eyes
but it will be hell naruto no opponent has fought against the jubi
and let him outside as if he were a puppy.

keep up the good can not wait for the next;)
UNSC DESTROYER EDESHIMARROW chapter 2 . 8/28/2013
Your story is beyond good it's great but please don't make the harm bigger than 3-4 girls because any large usually kills the story and just ended up being smut with all the story's I've ever read!
Dracowoman chapter 7 . 8/28/2013
great job, update soon please.

5/5
Pyrusblade chapter 7 . 8/23/2013
Ninjutsu and lots of them will be needed for that talk
narukyu1 chapter 7 . 8/20/2013
Good chapter.
narukyu1 chapter 6 . 8/20/2013
stuffed animal idea... seems like a kon kon rival has come... or whatever the name it has in bleach. woo the first steps are happening. good chapter.
holmestalentsmaster chapter 7 . 8/19/2013
great story, but i have a doubt. Are you going to make Naruto use only fire as a element or are you going to add more elements techniques beyond the bleach moves?
Guest chapter 7 . 8/16/2013
Good story
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