Reviews for Legend of the Kōjin no Kōtei
The Mad King Ben chapter 7 . 11/26/2013
Another awesome chapter, I hope you update soon.
Publicola chapter 4 . 11/17/2013
Hm. The issue here is that even though your main character is named 'Naruto', he bears little to no resemblance (in appearance - save the blond hair - or in personality) to the Naruto Uzumaki of canon. I'm not saying it's a poorly written character - I'm actually enjoying this fic quite a bit - but I do find it a bit disingenuous to classify him as "Naruto U." in the character list and summary. Unless you can come up with a background - Naruto comes from a tragic background in his own world, was transferred by the Shinigami to a much earlier age from this world, and only awoke in the presence of Kushina - then I'd encourage you to reclassify it as an "OC" instead.
regfurby chapter 7 . 11/17/2013
Nice. The meeting between Naruto and Tsunade would be interesting to say the least. Which other girls are going to show up? There are only so many known females in Kushina's generation...
stupidmocker chapter 7 . 11/11/2013
Good job on the story so what about Tsunade?BTW, love the fluffy goodness:)
Now,if only you could update sooner.

Continue the great work.9.5/10
mxdgray chapter 7 . 11/6/2013
I think a lot of characters in your fanfic is plain stupid. People like Madara and Hirashima can crush entire village if they tries hard. And stupid monkey like Hiruzen tries to capture Kushina? Just plain old fool. And the manipulator guy is also stupid. If he has power like Aizen and has that jewel thing then I can understand.
mxdgray chapter 6 . 11/6/2013
I dont really like people using main character and he falls for it. I saw that too much from anime or books.
mxdgray chapter 5 . 11/6/2013
is that obake shithole a decendent of Aizen or something?
Zatarra12345 chapter 7 . 10/8/2013
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uscias chapter 7 . 10/6/2013
Please update.
douglas.bailey.7946 chapter 7 . 9/27/2013
Just found this story and loving it:). Thx for the fluff before
Grimskull chapter 7 . 9/10/2013
I know that as a fan I have no right to do this but... for the sake of my little brain and knowing I act before think I will anyway.

I'm asking for a request and you and the other guy/gal may hate me after this but that would be ok.

Ever read the monkey's feathers by Code Hedira? I think the idea is brilliant even with Goku being a hell lot weaker and I enjoy so very much the concept and the plot its developing... but I'm a bit picky, so...

I greatly respect every writer on this site but the guy makes so many mistakes and some chaps are so short it's starting to get on my nerves. I also think that you are a great writer and I'd like to see what you can do with the idea.

Please, give a few minutes to read this and maybe another minutes to consider it. If you refuse I'll respect that, and if by some miracle you actually consider it you'll make a fan (and maybe several other) very happy
RegulusNeil chapter 7 . 9/10/2013
gud chapter like to see more
l1s44p chapter 7 . 9/5/2013
i like it :) thx for the update
Akula1986 chapter 7 . 8/30/2013
that was the best story I've ever read.
and I think I know who the man with the red eyes
but it will be hell naruto no opponent has fought against the jubi
and let him outside as if he were a puppy.

keep up the good can not wait for the next;)
Your story is beyond good it's great but please don't make the harm bigger than 3-4 girls because any large usually kills the story and just ended up being smut with all the story's I've ever read!
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