Reviews for Heaven's Side Story
top gear tony chapter 3 . 4/5/2013
Sweet story man. I mean really good, short to the point and a likeable ( none in your face) OC. I really like there was no romance as not every story needs one. I would have liked it to have been a bit longer but otherwise it's good.
DezoPenguin chapter 3 . 3/22/2013
Very nice piece! A bit more traditional UF feel, with the hard-boiled detective overtones, and Rin is, as always, entertaining (I liked the riff on her tech-savvy, or lack thereof, with the pocket watch in the first chapter). The use of an OC narrator helped, too, in terms of preserving the impact of horror (that is to say, Rin might be scared by the thing's threat level, but not shocked by the "wrongness" of it; she's dealt with worse), although ironically I found the description of the creatures he'd faced in the past in the previous chapters were worse than that of the familiar here...ah, subjectivity. I'm not sure how I'd feel about a longer series done like this, with OC narration, but in terms of this shorter piece it works very well.