|Reviews for Next Time|
| Moonlitfaith chapter 1 . 8/13
I have to agree with everyone's reviews. A perfect piece and a bit more than fluff .
Though I probably shouldn't have just read it while riding in the car - my husband was disappointed that I couldn't explain my laughing because of two sets of attentive little ears in the back seat.
| Luna12 chapter 1 . 12/2/2014
Fluffy, but still perfectly in character and futa well into the timeline. Very enjoyable read!
| skadoo chapter 1 . 11/13/2013
Great story, thank you. I always wondered what the immediate aftermath of that episode would look like.
| Malak chapter 1 . 9/24/2013
| Photogirl1890 chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
This is great. I like the humour. It's funny without being in any way, silly and it's fluff but not over-the-top fluff. Just the right balance.
A great add-on to the episode. Just the right length and I can hear them saying the dialogue.
Amongst my favourite lines:
"trust B'Elanna to have chosen his quarters for a reason"
""Oh, I'm never defenseless, flyboy.""
| pinky71103 chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
Great story! Tom was very sweet in 'Barge of the Dead' and your "Thank you" from B'Elanna was perfect.
| CrlkSeasons chapter 1 . 3/21/2013
It's not easy to marry believable elements of spirituality and sexuality in one piece. You've managed it beautifully.
A very satisfying addition to the venerable genre of missing moments.
| Alpha Flyer chapter 1 . 3/21/2013
Maj lut. Reading it, to quote a fellow P/Ter, was a "well-used moment."
| point-blank47 chapter 1 . 3/21/2013
Never anything wrong with a bit of P/T fluff, especially if it has a modicum of smut mixed in :-). Does that make it smuff?
Thanks for writing.