Reviews for Bright Star
ashesandhoney chapter 1 . 12/6/2014
Don't give me flack for making you cry when you write things like this!

I had never stopped to consider his mindset when he made that decision and that he did have to do it alone. Will he got to say good bye to but Tessa he didn't. I like that he considers the Institute his family.
carameltootsieroll chapter 1 . 7/20/2013
I BELIEVE I CRIED LIKE A BABY WHILST READING THIS. It was b-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l. Poetical, even.

"Jem, Will, and Tessa. Burning bright, burning up, burning out. The stars that go out with a bang." My favorite line. :)

keep writing!
MostDefinitelyFlorentine chapter 1 . 5/30/2013
Guest chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
this is great I loved it
the ticking clock chapter 1 . 3/21/2013
my poor Jem...
you captured him beautifully. So many people portray him as being so selfless and sweet, when really Jem was someone who was as human and as broken as Will. Amazing little story. Great job.
Meghan Thalia Jackson chapter 1 . 3/21/2013
That. Just made me cry.
wombat-of-awesomeness chapter 1 . 3/21/2013
I'm crying. Why. Why would you write this? It's so... Jem...But...Why...
void one chapter 1 . 3/21/2013
Ah, so sad...Love the reference to Keats. And the triple repetition of 'burning' in the second to last paragraph; adds a lot of power. Thank you